This was so good ! I always imagined how a workout session between Lloyd and Regal would be after the skit and you wrote an amazing story based on that (with some Lloyd Sheena furthermore), keep up the good work !

OMG! Way to go Sheena :3 you make the first step. But I really want to know what happen next during their session.

wow. that was awesome. I wasn't expecting that twist at the end but as I soon as sheena suggested a massage i was like "aww yeah".

ps. Did you take writing classes or something? dialogue and all that is written very well, really kept me hooked.

Ah, amazing. Just as expected. Great job, C9!

Inspiring.

Awesome one-shot dude

Nicely done. Lloyd was hilarious but in-character, Sheena was cute as always, but the gem of this one-shot was Regal. His statements and monotone demeanor made him a pleasure to read. The description was great and pace was even better. I enjoyed it. )

Hahah, very entertaining. And scarily informative - some biology and massage information I never knew of. o.O;

Very humorous, though some of the "growing up" in sights were a bit... I dunno, must've been me.

(Also, talking with Kat. She forgot to mention in her review the lack of hinting Lloyd's feelings towards Sheena showing up until just at the end.)

SoS

YAY! A Celsius story! 8D

Anyway, the review.

I liked this one. I like the idea and how you presented it. The only question I had was that I imagine the sand in Triet Desert being very hot. I also imagine that Lloyd was using his bare hands to do the push ups. How did he not burn himself? o.O

And it sounds like you're taking biology class, but that's not a bad thing, in fact, I think it's interesting how you incorporated some of this stuff and gave us a little lesson at the same time that you made it interesting. I love the windows you showed us where they were in one place and then another and then another, and you can see the progression of their travels as well as his training.

Good job, Celsius. You reminded me why I have you on author alert. :)

~~Kat

Damn, that was a nicely written piece. Everyone felt in character, and the end - haha, I loved it. A fine job you did here.