Reviews for Young Again |
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AshK1980 chapter 1 . 6/17/2012 The re-release is much better than this version. Good work on this one though. |
keybladedude chapter 8 . 5/22/2012 Interesting and very good story idea. The only thing I didn't like was the shortness of it. Anyways, good work. |
PokemonFreak90 chapter 8 . 10/3/2011 My favorite way to end a Pokemon story is with Ash married and with his family. Nice touch. But the names of his kids was a bit...unoriginal. Overall, I loved the story. It felt original, had a good pace, kept me interested all the way through, and I guess it also had something to do with the fact I love AshxDawn stories. LOL |
crazywolf1991 chapter 8 . 10/3/2011 Man that is a good ending and stuff man I liked your whole story the whole time if you make another pokemon story pm my message so I can read it so I wish you luck in writing and life and health |
PokemonFreak90 chapter 7 . 10/2/2011 Good job, Ash. You've faced your fears, conquered your inner darkness, and realized what's truly important to you. But now the question is, what's he going to do with the rest of his life now that he's chosen not to go back? |
AwesomeMan123 chapter 6 . 9/29/2011 Awe-Some is the word I use! Good job! :D |
JuanR.33 chapter 5 . 9/28/2011 Great chapter! Hope the next one will be really interesting. Update and goodbye |
crazywolf1991 chapter 5 . 9/28/2011 Nicely played I didn't see that coming lol well you looking forward and stuff goodluck writing will keep read its suspenceful |
AwesomeMan123 chapter 5 . 9/27/2011 YAY! UPDATE SOON MAN. IT IS AWESOME! :D |
PokemonFreak90 chapter 5 . 9/27/2011 Ash is running out of time! He'd better decide soon, or else he'll be doomed to make the same mistakes all over again! |
socio-intellectual chapter 4 . 9/25/2011 OH GOODNESS, THA DRAMA INTESIFYS! UPDATE SOOOOOOON! -Ama |
crazywolf1991 chapter 4 . 9/25/2011 Nice chapter I like it so keep on writing I look forward for some more |
AwesomeMan123 chapter 4 . 9/25/2011 Sweet. Awesome. Cool. The list goes on. Good job. |
socio-intellectual chapter 3 . 9/23/2011 OMFG! THIS STRY IS AWSUM! ASH IS BEING HAUNTED BY HIS PAST! I LUUUUUV IT! UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOON! PEARLSHIPPING 4EVAA! -Ama |
AwesomeMan123 chapter 3 . 9/20/2011 BOO-SHOKA MAN, KEEP IT UP! |