Nice! I’m sad Mitsuo is rarely written about, because some really good stories can come out of him, like this one! Very nice work.

I never thought much about creepy ol' Mitsuo (his eyes scare me LOL. XD) but uh, wow. This actually was really impressive! When I saw the summary "Can I really be the hero...?" It made me think of Disgaea, heh.

Anyway, this was way better than I had anticipated! Really! His character makes so much more sense (though I figured it was something like this) and it's nice to see it all written out in a great way.

Nice work~

I really enjoyed your other Mitsuo story and this one was really good as well. He's one of my favorite under appreciated characters, and your stories touch on a background for him I think many of us suspected throughout the game.

You really capture him well, even in this short piece. Hope to read more from you in the future.