I hope you are very clear about consent in your future stories, especially the ones about BDSM.

And one thing I absolutely hate, but see far too often- NO, girls do not always bleed their first time, unless they're on their period. NO, there is not pain. The only reason she would feel pain is from an actual injury. If the guy has a clue what he's doing, it doesn't hurt her at all, even if it is her first time.
Do some flipping research and stop spreading misinformation that hurts women.

Also, condoms.

Oh yes

Good, just god damn good

This was the best shit more!

aww this is so cute and soul:*told them what happened*
blackstar: pay up
kid: fine *gives $5*
soul:y'all made a bet over me and Maka fucking!
kid&blackstar: yeah

Ah, the rape fantasy, such a common and enjoyable one. As a sadist myself, this really resonated with me quite well. Kudos to you, you got yourself a fan.

This is amazing and just lovely work! You did a great job writing and I hope you continue to do so!

Watz a masochist?

That was one good smut *w*

yahooooo~

Loved It So Much!

I think this story was really good and entertaining. Keep it up!

Come on not common. Unless you were thinking of a different come also spelled cum.

This was a good fic, btu what the hell is with 'Gods'? are we in Camp half-blood? I think not.

Omg I absolutely loved this, definitely coming back to read it again. Love the description at the beach, I could totally see the gang behaving that way and what was that, does kid like our maka hey. Lol anyway, loved this PLEASE WRITE MORE :3