Reviews for What Does It Take To Open Your Eyes
emilyhotchner-olicity-bethyl chapter 2 . 4/2/2018
Could the cops really do keep this thing under lid? Is it even legal?

Ps. PLEASE POST YOUR FANFICS TO ARCHIVE OF OUR OWN TOO. PLEASE. SO MORE PEOPLE CAN READ THEM
emilyhotchner-olicity-bethyl chapter 1 . 4/2/2018
WHERE IS MIKE?! OH MY GOOOOOOOOOSH!
GirlinBlue2364 chapter 8 . 8/10/2013
Awesome story .LOVED IT
Unforgotten3 chapter 8 . 8/1/2012
I just read this and loved ittttttt!
Chocolatekat chapter 8 . 6/18/2012
That was AWESOME
zeza101 chapter 8 . 2/6/2012
You just blew my mind...

Im not even kidding.

Amazing plot mind blowing ending (8D)

-Z-
kunf'you'z-ed chapter 8 . 9/10/2011
Oh my god. This last chapter was a complete shock. I never expected it to all have been a dream/ vision of the future. I can admit that this was probably the only story that threw me for a loop as completely as this did since i'm at least able to predict most of what will happen in the end. I loved everything about this chapter, from the way that Harvey ran in after Mike to the way that Harvey never let Mike out of his sight and got the shooter arrested.

It was so adorable how Harvey ended up on Mike's doorstep just cuz he had to make sure that he was fine in person. This was one of my favorite confessions so far for this pair. The reactions you gave them were so real and i could believe that Harvey would really trip over himself and that Mike wouldn't believe him cuz he thinks nothing ever goes right for him. And the part when Harvey was like ' i'll repeat it as many time's ad you want, move in with me' was so good and i felt anxious to read read Mike's reply. I can't wait for more of your stories! Thanx, bye!
deezy-y chapter 8 . 9/4/2011
My first Harvey/Mike fic. I've only been able to see the first two episodes (the next is tomorrow) but I love the show already. The guys seem to have a lot of chemistry and my mind was already thinking of them in a slashy way. I really enjoyed this a lot and I'm sure that I'll be reading more in the future. :)
Asgardian Honor Society chapter 8 . 9/4/2011
Do you mean to tell me that after subjecting me to nearly more heartache, worry, and blistering fury than one would think one could bear before taking leave of one's senses, it had all been a BLOODY NIGHTMARE? Oh~ho~ho, you're a clever one, you are. Fantastic story, love, spot-on portrayal of Harvey's slow but sure realisation of his love for his scruffy little associate and Mike's never~ending refusal to put his own wellbeing before that of anyone else's. Both their brands of denial is part of the reason those two were tailor~made for one another.
SchwarzShifter chapter 8 . 9/1/2011
That... was pretty awesome. Harvey being precognitive is something that I NEVER would have thought of, but it makes an interesting idea as to how he got to be the best. The scene where he went to Mike's apartment was also extremely sweet, if just a little OOC.

Love it D (And I wanna see more precog Harvey 3)
Muffy the Dough Slayer chapter 8 . 8/29/2011
Awww this is so sweet XD I love it! Excellent job! I'd leave a better review but I should have been in bed already for school O.o but I was reading this XD So yeah. Anyway, love it! Thanks for posting!
TkMomijiOXkisaHiro chapter 6 . 8/29/2011
please dont tell me this is actually complete! CU Z I Wanna know what happens! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE!
C8H7N3O2 chapter 8 . 8/28/2011
I started reading this like 2 hrs ago.. At 3:30 in the morning.. Knowing I have to be up psycho early. I vowed to read like the first few chapters, then pick it up tomorrow - but I couldn't! This story pulled me in so hard that I had to finish it tonight... Had to! I am full of so many emotions right now, its amazing! This story was beyond crazy good.. And so action packed! Oh my god! Definitely adding it to my faves! Thank you so much for writing this!
scryoko chapter 8 . 8/26/2011
Hm... I must admit that I'm having mixed feelings about this. I really enjoyed how the story started out and throughout most of the story, but I must admit that I was a bit disappointed when I found that everything was only a weird dream/premonition and didn't really happen. Though that's just me and the fact that I love hurt/comfort and though we got the hurt, we didn't get the comfort so I was just sad about that. :)

But anyway, the story was gripping and, from a literary perspective, the "it was only a dream" part was certainly a great twist that, I'm pretty sure, threw many people off. So, from that point, great job! Nevertheless, I enjoyed this fic. Thanks for sharing. :)
chibi341 chapter 8 . 8/23/2011
Oh wow.

I really wasn't expecting that ending at all. It was sucha shock, and it totally worked. This fanfic was too brilliant for words.

I must now stalk you other fics 'cause this one was that good ]
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