I loved it, and Olivier wasn't OOC, I could definantly see her doing that. :) Great job!

It not out of character. Very well done. I really like it. Perfect. Maybe second chapter with more love? Maybe. Just thinking.

I thought it was pretty darn good, and they seemed well enough in character to me. Nice little moment in time.

I liked it a lot. Very sweet! Despite the fact you had trouble with these two, I thought you wrote them pretty well. Good work :)

I love it! It was great how you compared him to both a servant and an advisor because he really is both! I do hope you'll write more someday

I love this 3