Hi jus finished reading all 9ch it was supa. Wonderful hw u pair AudNath its amzing. And I love ur other story Phoenix Rising can't wai finish it plz email me .

Great job! It was in character and so well-planned.

Love it!

I'm too lazy to log in. Great ending and I really want to see the rest of the bits. Thanks for sharing.

Very cool and I hate reading a cliff hanger even if I love to write them.

Thanks for sharing.

Great chapter and thanks for the recap. I want to read more but I must on the clock. Thanks so much for sharing.

I've read this chapter the same day you updated it, but didn't reviewed. Sorry about that.
I loved this story so much! I love how Audrey and Nathan work together their relationship after finding out they would/could be parents. I always wondered how Audrey would be as a mother, I don't need to tell how Nathan would be as a father lol
I wanted to read that letter, was Audrey breaking up or something?
I didn't like too much about the thing going on between Holly and Duke... It is a strange thought... It brings me some Twilight feelings and I'm not a fan.
I would like to see Nathan's reaction, though, when he finds out. That would be hilarious!
Well, thank you very much for sharing this story. You are amazing!

Great story. Perfectly in character, I can just picture this as an episode. Nicely done.

I'll be honest with you, I especially made an account to review this story and then write some of my own, because I am so inspired by this. You're an amazing writer, the dialogue was so fantastic and realistic and the idea was incredibly creative. Now I am off to read the rest of your Haven stories!

good story & enjoy readin it!

Great storyline!

Whoa. This was an amazing concept, and very well written! It feels like a snapshot -both exactly the right size and leaving the reader wanting more. I hope you'll add to both Audrey/Nathan and Holly/Duke's stories. Thank you for sharing your world!

Yay, happy ending for all! I'm so glad that Duke and Holly were able to have an actual relationship (and I think the fit would be perfect for him - Audrey and Nathan's daughter ;)). Happiness :). Thanks for sticking with this and finishing it out (and so well). Lovely!

Yes a happy ending, Audrey was spared and now has a chance to have Holly and get to know her better. Duke is happy with the outcome and his mystery lady (Holly). Looking forward to your future works.

Weeping that's in the end but I love it! Can't wait for you to finish your other stories! I'm also more interested into the theory of Holly's staying in this timeline. Why wouldn't she go back though? Even if she has a choice? What about old Audrey? How does that work?

If there is a spark between Holly and Duke...try not to take any offence but it reminds me an awful lot about Twilight's Jacob and Renseme or however you spell it. Lmao. But not as creepy.