Brilliant job! It was short, but absolutely adorable! :D

I love this! It sounds so awesome. you described the whole Lily and James thing with this... story... in 1 chapter. This rocks!

Pure awesomeness. I love the connection between fire and Lily, it was done beautifully. I really felt James's emotions and wants and the descriptions were pretty as well. Great job, I loved it.

Olivia

AMAZING! I really, really love this. :)

Wow. This was amazing.I really enjoyed it.

Okay yeah, I think everyone's about took my words, but I couldn't NOT review because this was like, the best piece I've read for so long. All the emotion and the description and the chaos that's not really there made it the perfect balance of like, everything that's good. I loved it like I love HP ;) ~Adam.

Lovely, lovely one-shot. I like your descriptions and the format of this one-shot.

Love it :)

This is awesome! The line breaks and repetition you used (just a girl, extraoridnary) made it flow really well- I could almost hear the beat in the background! When you use underlines and italics, they're meaningful. You make James' motives to burn very real and tangible- excellent job.

My only suggestion is that "extraordinary-ness" interrupts the flow a little bit. But I can't think of a better word off the top of my head.

WOW, this was awesome! Really good stuff. I love how your James had a dark side here, as in everything I have ever read (and admittedly, written as well) he was the happy go lucky joker. Well done, seriously. I really liked this. The prose was beautiful as well, not quite orthodox but not quite freeverse either. It was a delightful read. Thank you for the story.

This is great - it flows really well and it's very original. I really enjoyed it!

okay so this is like, beautiful. i am in love with it. you've put your own sort of twist on the idea, and it's lovely. it flows along nicely, never hitting any ruts, and it's cool and collected. great mechanics, and this is quality work. awesome job, really.