while it does derivate wildly, I do think it's a fun fic, and I thoroughly wish it kept going, but unfortunately it seems dead
quite a shame, I really liked it

Fran’s just getting more entertaining with each chapter. Thanks for the chapter!

Shinji not being a trash human being is a really novel experience, and Shirou summoning someone who’s not Seiba makes for an interesting future. Nice chapter!

Frankenstein does not have Mad Enhancement. She has Astolfo Enhancement

This looks good

Well Shirou lost it, the result was instant power up. See being insane is always the better choice.

Your story started interesting, but at this point it's just full of bullshit.
Shame, really.

The chant involved science so it summoned a monster born from science as a servant lol

Kill him!

Hehehehehehehe hey yes yes nice

What the hell is this stupid fucking story even meant to be? It's incomprehensible garbage. Everything basically happens at random, and everyone is absolutely retarded. It's basically a crack fic, but it's labeled "adventure" instead of "parody".

Everything since Berserker was summoned has been increasingly moronic.

Then I find out that this story which you labeled "complete" isn't even actually fucking completed, so you're actually just wasting everyone's time. You dumbfuck liar.

This story makes absolutely no sense, it's so fragmented and so weirdly paced that the reader is left mostly confused, and not in a good way. Interesting idea but less than mediocre execution.

Zouken wore a apron? What shall I hear next normal machines that is thinking.

Shinji is really an actual magus here?!Lol.

Considering how heavy that Mace of hers is its doubtful that even a strong current could carry it far...why dont they just rent some equipment and get it out of the river?