so freaking hot

So hot

SEQUEL! TOW-SHOT! JUST CONTINUE THIS! TT

*almost dies of nosebleed* Fucking beautiful... i loved it! Nice referencing btw, botdf is an amazing band! Ichi, Shiro, and Grimm make great sex scenes together!

Best Fucking Story Ever

all so sexy

That was so hot. I love those sexy twins so much.

This was... WOW!

shit that's hot.

This has to be one of the hottest one-shots I've ever read. I'm not normally one for three-somes but this was just really well written! I really like Shiro and Ichi as masochistic twins and what with them leading Grimm into one of the hottest sex-scenes ever... I must say I was really hoping for a second chapter :)
I was kind of impressed by how you made a not very realistic plotline into such a good story. You're a very good writer! Hope to read more of your work :)

That was one of the hottest things I've read all year. Fantastic job. Can't believe it's only a oneshot XD *adds to favourites* x

I was just thinkng that I've read too much innocent-Ichigo fanfiction and that I was getting fed up. And then what do I see in my tabs ? This steamy jewel of a fic...I'm so happy *q*

OH please contiue this story in where they quit thier job and start living with grimm or something. It was a really good hardcore Yaoi, i will also love how the other charaters play out

*nose starts gushing blood* sexy sex~ 3

Wow...*nosebleed* that's was so sexy...I mean hot! And you made a threesome of my favorite yaoi couples too oh yea you rock you just made my day fuckin loved this story! X3