Reviews for The Kiddnapping of Ethan Morgan |
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wendy chapter 15 . 11/10/2018 Yasssss its good |
Hi chapter 14 . 6/17/2018 Benny: I love me too They all give him are u serious look Benny:what I wanted to be in clueded |
Hi chapter 12 . 6/17/2018 Awwwwww |
Hi chapter 7 . 6/17/2018 This ending is the exact one to another story |
Hi chapter 4 . 6/17/2018 That's weird u have the same lines from a kickin it fanfic |
jayswing96 chapter 12 . 7/17/2017 Whoa! Jesse seemed to just fly off the handle at the beginning. What happened to his cool, calm, and collected personality? |
jayswing96 chapter 11 . 7/17/2017 Sara sounds like she's blaming Venny for everything. Wow. What a great friend... (sarcasm) Anyways the chart doesn't say ageless. Also Benny wasn't the only one who missed that Ethan and Jesse slipped past. Sara missed it too, but she seems to be implying that she knew the whole time and shifted her blame to Benny solely. |
jayswing96 chapter 10 . 7/17/2017 In a lot of the dialogue you used the word "screamed" to describe how they delivered their words, but I feel like you used that a bit too much. Also I feel like the better term for what they're doing is "yelling" rather than "screaming" or at the very least use a mixture of the two that way it won't be so tiring to read the same word over and over again in a row. |
ross chapter 15 . 10/27/2016 wow |
Ethan Morgan chapter 1 . 5/23/2016 Lowkey, your grammar makes me wanna kms. |
Acuario chapter 15 . 3/3/2016 Me gusto mucho esta historia |
JuliaJulz chapter 15 . 1/11/2016 Wow wow wow fantastic, amazing, wonderful, awesome, fabulous story i loved it so much i got so intreged into this story i loved it so much. are you going to do more of these types of stories because i loved this one so much i loved it |
MidnightPhantom84 chapter 15 . 3/10/2015 Hope you do the retake of it I really like the story. |
bit of comfort chapter 15 . 1/18/2015 hey, hey. it's really alright what you're doing. you really don't have to worry so much about your account being taken away. there are millions of stories on here, you know that the people of FF won't be all uptight about one little bending of the rules. just chill out a bit. i totally support what you're doing. 3 |
Guest chapter 5 . 9/8/2013 That is the best location ever! lol |