Aww! That ending though... we all know you liked it Naruchan!~ Seriously though, this isn't even lemon, this is lemonade.

that was kinda funny and werid all at the same time

I can't believe I haven't reviewed this one before! I really like it and come back to it every once in awhile. Anyways it's pretty good although I recommend drawing out the sex scene a little more and adding details about the experience... Over all though it was decent.