That's a very nice fic. I'm not sure Gothel would give Rapunzel up but maybe a good scary trip to the Snuggly Duckling would keep her home.

I really liked this. My favorite part is were you mentioned Gothel being lonely. It just made since to me...

Anyway good job.

I like this! It's so in character, and Gothel seems like a motherly figure to Rapunzel. First stories can sometimes be the hardest, but I commend for this story. Bravo! save to favorites ;)