God I love this story! They're both in character and both so .

I never would have guessed this is your first time writing in first-person! You did so well, it legit surprised me when I read the author's note. (I read author's notes last because sometimes they spoil certain parts of the story for me, just in case you're wondering how I avoided it until the end.)

Grrrr So Hott! Just wish it never ended.

Oh, I haven't laughed so badly for soooo long!..
Thank you, wonderful Author!

yo craig, you should apologize to token man :/he'll be the future president of america and pissing him off is not a smart move. Congrats on bagging HotTea though. Hope yer having a wonderful author!

BRUH.

waw me encanta eres fantástica sigue asi XD

I love the way this story's being narrated, it sounds exactly like how I'd imagine Craig's monologue would sound like; blunt, but really suave at the same time. And also, the way you wrapped it up with how the fic started - awesome :D

oh sweet Jesus, Craig, it's teeth will tear out my jugular and I'll bleed to death and you'll slip in my blood and crack your head open and then it will get you too! GAH! So. Freaking. Adorable.
That alone killed me...
This story was so fucking awesome, like, I'm not even coherent right now... this was the best shit I've read so far omg... it's been a while since I loved a story this much.

I luv the hell out of this. It's just so effing adorable, and no one's ooc either.

THAT WAS SO EFFING CUTEEEEE

So cute, yet sexy. Really good job bro!

Makes sense: you get rid of rid of the underpants, you get rid of the underpants gnomes.

Soooooooo amazing perfect. Prob one of da best creeks in the works. Please write more

*lets out an ear piercing scream* THAT WAS SOOOOOO HAWTTTTTTT!