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Nice to get a little backstory on how these kids were created. But poor Bella. I hope her friends are able to bring her back when the time is right.

Update again soon!

Okay, while the chapter was nice, I think you may have wanted to force that revelation or "clue" for the cullens a bit too early. You describe the blood being overwhelming for Bella, that Tyler lost a lot of blood and that it covered her shirt and hands. But somehow the cullens stuck around to see what happened?

Jasper nearly went nuts with only a drop of blood from a papercut in canon and the rest of the family other than Carlisle couldn't stand to be around her after her arm was cut when Edward pushed her. Having someone lose that much blood should've sent them either running or straight for the body.

Yo yes more, more, MORE! So happy you updated. I really enjoy this story and it's been a while. Sorry to hear some person couldn't be creative enough to write their own story so they basically had to steal yours. Real shitty but look on the bright side that's how good your writing and story is, that you have wannabe's. But really tho can't wait for the nxt update

It's sad that people had to copy from your story in order for there's to get interesting I love your story and can't wait to read more please don't give up and report the author if you have to. I funny enough read that story and was surprised at the similarities.

Of course that that bitch Bella does not give a shit about her father.

I really like this story but please update it a little bit faster. I forgot most of the story line and had to reread a lot of it to understand this chapter.

I’m so sorry that happened.
People shouldn’t steal from your chapters

Yes you came back!

there is another story called Black Harts from
Iwishiwerebellaswan that is very similar to this story, with the same names (Trevor, Xander, etc) and special division

I was missing this story so much. Awesome chapter. Can't wait fpr next.

Its alive woooooo

I miss this story , please update again soon .

I truly don't even know how to explain how fucking amazing and badass this story is and how your writing and progression of the plot has only gotten better and better with each chapter. This is hands down no competition in sight the best twilight fanfic story I have read that is a Bella/Edward pairing (tho truthfully a small part of me might be rooting for Trevor now XP). Anyway eagerly and somewhat impatiently await your next update
P.S. goddamn just love this story. You're amazing

Can you pleeeeeeese continue this it is amazing