Love this! The idea is unique and well done. love how you swap between the two worlds. Please update and keep up the good work!

When is "soon"?

This is really good. It's different to what you'd expect. Instead of and AU, it's a Fanon in Canon. Please continue.

Update soon, please.

If I were Naurto I would be a litte concerned if he was writing about me. He can't get rid of ero sensi nickname even in the story.

i think i am going to enjoy this immensely. :)

Definite win author!

I like the idea of Jiraiya taking Naruto out of the village earlier on... *looking forward to the next chapter*

After reading the second chapter, I am very much intrested in this story. It looks very intresting and I really like it! And I'm only on the second chapter. :)

Interesting concept! I'm psyched for the next installment.

Oh, so much lolz from this so far. I likez this idea, an AU that actually fits into canon. Can we has more frequent updates please?

LOL Well I'm glad Jiraiya is writing true to his character as well as Naruto's. LOL

So Cute! XD Please continue it? :)

oh my! different turn of events indeed. can't wait to read more!

IF this is Jiraiyas book, does it make sense to depict his village as that close minded and stupid? Seriously, why the "drunken mob" of any kind? Isn't consistent and unending negligence enough?

So contrived.