What a heartwarming ending to a wonderful story. True, I had hoped it would be longer, with more events going about, but it doesn't change the fact that I truly did like this story. I simply adore how you don't rush with these kinds of writing, how each occurrence seems to mix together wonderfully.

I'd really love to read more on this, but, alas, it has ended. I guess it's time to try out your other series-stories :)

so neither twin is gay or straight, they are whoever-is-stubborn-enough-to-get through-to them-sexual.

An absolutely beautiful series, thank you so much for sharing.

I like how everything worked out in the end. This has lovely diction.

I'm really loving this series! I love how Souza is just so happy and enthusiastic about everything! Cried a little when Yuui and Tomoyo worked things out too in the third thing. Keep up the good work

I adore this new family - all of them! The moments when Fai and Yuui are angry at each other but then become so much closer and fill in the missing gaps they both had for so long, grieving for the brothers that died so they could live was so precious and beautiful that it made me ache so much (because I apparently can't spill tears that easily, but aching counts, so...) The worries about the pregnancy and what was to come with their twin daughters was wonderful as well, since Yuui (and Fai, if he had twins somehow) would feel so betrayed in many ways.

Kurogane being the overprotective uncle is such a hilarious but so adorable image - ('let me show her how to climb a tree properly because I need to protect her but I'm still a kid at heart' is the best side of him I've seen in a long time). The way he reacts of his homecoming, finding out his best friend has a consort (now husband) and will become a mother was hilarious; especially with Souma filling him in. There was a part you wrote in Chapter 2 that said him about 'setting people on fire' and I burst out laughing. Perhaps that is planned revenge for when those villagers set Fai on fire in 'The Crucible'? :P

But what I love the most is how it doesn't matter what gender Fai and Yuui fell in love with. It's the people who understood them, was stubborn to let them go, and love them for all they were and give them hope again. It left me sobbing grossly mentally, but in the happiest way.

damn beautiful and perfect! i just love that the story didn't exactly end as a happily ever after but more of a hopeful tone. . Again you did an amazing job on portraying everyone's charcter in here. just love it!

"Love was never about men and women to me," Fai finished. "Love was… about Kurogane."

I'm in absolute love with that sentence.

Really enjoyed reading this from start to finish, through all the angst and drama to the sunshine and happiness. Their kids are so cute! 3 It's so nice to read a happy ending for everyone, and this was so well done. I also really loved the bit at the end where Fai, still a little insecure, says that it can't last forever; Tomoyo's reply is so simple and yet I still found myself tearing up a little.

Great job! ()b

That's the end? Aw, I want to see more of Kuro-uncle.

I think it's time for Kuro-daddy to shine. How 'bout we get a KuroFai family story? )

Very cute. :D

This was lovely.

I have nothing but love for this ending.

*hearts*

I really like your stories, just can't review all the time because I'm dumb :-D, but you have nice stories,,

Love it!

Hopefully we can see a pregnant Fay in this fic

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I'm beyond words... it's always an ordeal, but two days.. she should be out cold for at least a day. (My friend was..but it were only 44h.)

It's so cute, I'm even going to ignore the sexism Nihon seems to be stuck with.

And it's somewhere near morning already, so Good night and please please please produce more! There can never be enough fluff and horny Fai. xD