Cute! I like how you made Fred upset because he usually never is :)

Awww, that was so sweet. 3

I loved Fred being all upset - he's so adorable.

I hope you're going to write more fics about these two. :-) I'd love to read them.

This was actually amazing, one of the best one-shots of yours I have read, I can so imagine it being in the books/films its like J.K Rowling wrote it herself.

You have such an amazing talent here, please continue to write fanfics they are soooooo gooooooooood.

I am pleased to say that I read your first storys before you became a published author :) its gonna happen.

Love you xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx