Reviews for Loose Ends
Elise chapter 1 . 2/10/2019
Even when reading it the 3rd time. ;)
Elise chapter 1 . 2/10/2019
Love it.
qMBOj chapter 1 . 9/3/2018
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tmelange chapter 1 . 7/27/2015
This is just like a scene out of the book. Exactly what the book is missing. Bravo!
Elise chapter 1 . 12/18/2014
Awesome, wonderful, great story! :)
Elise chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
Very cool fanfiction! I enjoyed it very much.
StormSong8 chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
This was really incredible, you truly managed to show all their personalities well. Great read!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
Oh that was really good. I wish i found this a lot sooner
LunaBianca chapter 1 . 10/27/2011
I like reading Fidelius' POV, and this was a good moment in the series to imagine what could happen next. I smirked over Max's reaction. I didn't like Tavi in this piece. Maybe you intended that, making him more harsh to illustrate the effect of firecrafting...He still kinda irked me. :)