This was so in character! I listened to the song while reading it. Great job!

nice

it's warm and fuzzy to read something so sweet despite the background being a stormy cold night. i like how you bring out the emotional tempest within the characters and also in return leaving this soothing after taste in me..

Wow, I just did a fangirl squeel which i havent done in a LOOOOONG time, i loved it! Very sweet!

Lovely~ I really like the tone of it. Also, I feel you managed to portray the characters true to their personalities. xD

sweet

So I was able to see another NO. 6 work from you~

Alright now onto the review.

The first thing I noticed, was a really detailed description of Shion's feelings and things surrounding him, because of it I was able to imagine it. I absolutely loved this style, the way how you put so little talk in so much text. I can also see how you kept them perfectly in character. Shion as the curious, oblivious person and Nezumi-being Nezumi, a person who seems cold at first but has a warm heart :3

I really enjoyed the cuteness of those two~ And also the idea itself. Keep it up!

I enjoyed this story so much, thank you for uploading it.

Shion and Nezumi are so cute together there's no way they won't give people a lasting impression

I would like reading the next fictions you mentioned including the two.

Aww, so adorable! 3 wonderfully written Jess~

This was absolutely adorable! Extremely well-written while staying simple and keeping them perfectly in I love in a story! :)

I'm curious to see what other stories you have thought for them! (especially the AU one :D)

On LJ,whenever an entry gets "too large",I'm afraid that you have no choice but to split it into two parts or more :(