Uwu

Just read both of your M&M stories. Very graphic in parts but your passion and devotion to your stories showed thru. Best wishes.

I think this one failed because you are making this too one sided. It's everyone vs Edward. And Edward is a doormat.. In the first one.. Bella still had fight in her... In this one.. Edward's just a doormat and it's annoying.

I know this story is old, but, I just found it and the one before it. Just wanted to say thZnks & I enjoyed it.

I loved "Malevolent" and was so thrilled that I found this story today! I am on chapter 3 and cannot stop reading ... So anxious to find out if crazy bastard Edward is still alive. I really love sequels when done well. This story is great because it deals with the aftermath and what comes next.

i am soo pissed that she ended back together with that pig -_- he shoulda died when she set him on fire!

I am so glad that Edward has finally changed. You sure know how to write anxiety and suspense. I can't wait to hear all about Bella's evil plan. Bring on darkella!

To review or not review. That is the question. Wait, wrong story! So in the first story we have a darkward. In this story we have a darkella. How awesome. This will as good as the first story, I can already tell. After all, Alice had a vision.

I really enjoyed the story line. It was kinda hard to read because Bella's dialog wasn't in quotations, but near the end of the story I kind of got used to it. Thank you for writing it.

Don't take this offensively but I preferred Malevolent. I prefer darkward. I like this but he's kind of being whiny, I'll finish reading before I judge the whole story though.

of course he would not have scars he is a vamp and would heal beautifully

I read both of your stories and I thought they were very good and verry well written! I would have commented more but I just couldn't wait for what was coming after all those cliffies: ) job well done!

Aww, I can't believe it's over. It was a great journey, though.

I would love if you came out with an epilogue or something, but I suppose that's just me trying to prolong the story!

Great job and great ending!

I enjoyed your story very much and look forward to other works from you.

That's kinda confusing. Is Bella changed? And if she was, how in the hell could she get pregnant? and crying? don't get it. But good chapter anyway, the story ended :((