Reviews for Cats and Ferrets Fourth Year's Blues |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Loved your story, now favourited! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ummm thios part- I'm being chased around by the Dark Lord, who the ministry and many other people do not think is back. He's tried to kill me only two times since I've gotten here already. Death Eaters are after me...is worng that happens next year unless i missed the part where the years have swapped |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg lol! She tells a guy that he looks like her mother xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() XD lol ur character is very interestin in a good way |
![]() ![]() I loved your story doll!(: no worries you did an amazing job hun(: |
![]() ![]() Superbass, by Nicki Minaj |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well.. to answer your most important question,did I like it ? No , I didn't I loved it ! And aurora's personality was amazeing even after all she's been through was still good hearted and mieschievous , sarcastic and she's perfect . It would be kinda cool if not make it one " person " switch from third to first to mix it up ! Last but not least NOO don't kill sirius also I can't wait to read some more of your brilliant work:D write on , write on ! |
![]() ![]() This story is orginal , creative , captivateing , exciteing and well written this chapter was amazeing , the way you wrote aurora's vision I could see it playing out in my head .. I loved it and when they sung the pokemon theme song I couldn't stop laughing ...and now it's stuck in my head ! This chapter was awsome :) ! Write on , write on ! |
![]() ![]() ...sue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think what you did with neville and aura was really smart , there a cute couple and as you correctly put it , it was an unexpected twist .. Can't wait to read more . Write on , write on ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter is just as good as the previous ones and I like how you ended the chapter with a myterious cliff hanger . Write on, write on ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This has got to be my favourite chapter so far ! It was funny , well written ,everyone was in charecter and the kiss wasn't to early and her reaction was perfect . The story is brilliant and I can't wait to read more the only minor problem is that there are a few mistakes here and there but there no big deal and they don't effect the story in any way . I love your story . Write on , write on ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This has got to be my favourite chapter so far ! It was funny , well written ,everyone was in charecter and the kiss wasn't to early and her reaction was perfect . The story is brilliant and I can't wait to read more the only minor problem is that there are a few mistakes here and there but there no big deal and they don't effect the story in any way . I love your story . Write on , write on ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it go on! |
![]() ![]() ![]() do i detect a touch of mary sue- ness? |