Reviews for Spirit of a Ranger
SF3P0X1 chapter 10 . 4/14/2019
So, having read all of this in one go, I'm disappointed to see that it hasn't been continued in some time. I sincerely hope you continue with this project in the near future.

Now, on to the review.

I've read a few EVA/MMPR crossovers. Most of them deal with trying to combine the worlds, and a couple placed the White/Green Ranger in Tokyo-3, but I've never seen a story (personally) that attempted to drop Shinji into the MMPR universe. It would make sense that Zordon would be knowledgeable in the subject of alternate universes. It's a good story, but I feel like it moves fast. I have the same problem: I have a scene I want to write for the audience, but I don't want to bore them with details. The problem is, the more details we get, the better chance we have of watching the scene unfold in our imaginations.

This entire segue with Shinji being brainwashed and turned on the Rangers feels like it should have been much longer. The finish felt anticlimactic, and the appearance of the Masked Rider feels like a forced ex machina with no real reason given for his being there, other than "I help my friends when they're in trouble." Why was he on Earth? How did he find out that the Rangers were in trouble in the first place? And how urgent is this evil that he has to face if he had time to make a planetary pitstop completely unrelated to his mission at hand?

I'm not bashing your story, at all. Just pointing out a few things that kinda bug me about it so far. I am eagerly awaiting its conclusion.
Wrath of The Sun Deity chapter 10 . 12/23/2017
Good story man. Really like it, and I can't wait for more.
lord mau shinji 500 chapter 10 . 12/3/2017
what a great chapter friend shinji and dragonzord an explosive combination xd greetings
Anon-1 chapter 1 . 10/29/2017
Well written dialogue, good characterization, fun shout-outs to other related media, and Jojo's references make this one of the most entertaining fics I have read on this site. The action is exciting and dramatic, and holds my interest. I hope to see more of Shinji's old home and the effect his absence has caused on his friends and whether he will return or not. Perhaps Kamen Rider could show up? Or the modern riders? Your sense of humor is fitting and is a joy to read. I was constantly smiling to myself while reading. Excellent, no, simply powerful. Peace!
Guest chapter 10 . 10/29/2017
Very well written? YES. Interesting concept? Yes. Action that keeps interest? Yes! I hope to see more from you. I also like how your sense of humor rolls and that one jojo's reference. Nothing can go wrong with more well placed references.
gunman chapter 10 . 10/29/2017
Awesome update.
And it does remind me of how Tommy became the Green Ranger long ago.
And nice to see Dex here as well. Shinjis gonna need all the help he can get. If he decides to be a Ranger.
Then again, he might agree to be a Ranger out of guilt. To make up for what he has done.
That does seem to be in his character.
Great job.
Write on.
Racer Z chapter 10 . 10/29/2017
Unless you changed something Shinji and Tommy can't both be active Rangers at once, because in ROTGR the Green Ranger powers are fueled by vampirically draining Tommy's White Ranger powers and in the process his life force. It's also why the Dragonzord was able to beat the Tigerzord despite being inferior to it, notice how the Thunder Megazord mopped the floor with it by comparison.
StraightedgeEpyon chapter 10 . 10/28/2017
Short but sweet
UKNE-12mark3 chapter 10 . 10/28/2017
This chapter is quite short but i can understand the progress of the story. I just wait to see how nerv will react to this development
lord mau shinji 500 chapter 9 . 4/27/2017
Great series is great I hope you continue the shinji the green ranger plus the dragonzord is great epic series is great I liked it a lot you are great greetings.
gunman chapter 9 . 3/10/2017
Thought I reviewed this, but okay.
Great work on this. Shinji is really becoming a deadly supervillain.
And now the Masked Rider is here?
This just gets better and better.
I really wonder about the fall out from all this.
If Shinji will be forgive himself, or will his guilt destroy him completely? He could try and kill himself.
Just food for thought.
Write on.
SSTR87 chapter 9 . 11/5/2016
Nice! So, Shinji is doing what I assumed and replacing Tommy's ancestor. Also, we need more! And bring back fan service please
SSTR87 chapter 8 . 11/5/2016
Hahaha for such a short chapter I really laughed way harder than I should have!
KingSora3 chapter 9 . 10/16/2016
LOVE IT!
KingSora3 chapter 8 . 10/16/2016
No Shinji!
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