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Darkness7913 chapter 1 . 1/17/2016 So hawt! I can imagine Hibari in the library since it's quiet and all and Tsuna.. Wao! Hibari is so bold! Tsuna is doomed! Haha this is so cute! I hope for a sequel or something..! Write more 1827 pls? |
wildcat1144 chapter 1 . 9/16/2015 Lol you're funny and I liked it you should continue it |
Clover letter chapter 1 . 4/18/2014 i like the idea of glasses hibari |
Sky Veneziano chapter 1 . 4/17/2014 Oh, my... Great job on this! |
blueicequeen chapter 1 . 4/13/2014 Hahahaha! Getting laid for turning in the books late. What an interesting punishment. |
tsunasoraceillover chapter 1 . 10/14/2013 Please tell me there is a sequel |
Carmz C chapter 1 . 11/12/2012 I will never think of the Science section in my library the same way again! KINKY 3 Me Love Kinky Library sex is really starting to appeal to me... 1827 feels! Ohohohohon... I love the story. It may not be as detailed as others but it delivers the job just as awesomely as the rest! |
liplocks chapter 1 . 10/18/2012 OMFG IM IN LOVE?! i loved all the little jokes you sprinkled in and ofc the emit. Librari is too hot to handle and tsuna is too freaking adorbs |
hibari-broya chapter 1 . 9/13/2012 Omg, that was really sexy. Asdfgfd. Wonderful job, babu! And Hibari with glasses, omg asfgf, bless. |
Yume chapter 1 . 8/9/2012 You should continue this story it's really good. It would be cool if you made it into a story |
ezcap1st chapter 1 . 6/15/2012 Ooh, he definitely is. He doesn't come equipped... What a practical boy! Also it's probably quite painful for him, standing up makes him really tight. I think. |
Animefreak Rin chapter 1 . 2/19/2012 Awesome story! I love how straight forward he is and giving him glasses is the cherry on the sunday! That little part at the end was hilarious! |
Kimiko chapter 1 . 1/12/2012 Oh my fucking god -w- *Blushing very hard* I love this :DDD Continue pretty pleawe? |
zegez chapter 1 . 1/6/2012 H-Hot~ a job well done *thumbs up* There is just one mistake that I've noticed though, well, I say one mistake but it happens more than once, it just happens to be the same mistakse repeated. Anyway. Umm, I think maybe you've gotten 'to' and 'too' mixed up because you're using 'too' incorrectly in place of what should be 'to'. . . if that makes sense. Sorry I don't know how to explain that better. It happens here: "... especially when he was trying not too freak out." here: "...hand still tracing patterns along him while the other is brought too his mouth." twice here: "...and he's about too be fucked harder than anyone should in the science section of Namimori Library (He's about too find out)." here, although the first 'too' is corect: "It's already too much for Tsuna too bear..." here: "...and the fact that he's just lost his virginity too a complete stranger..." here: "... Tsuna manages too get out a question." aaand here: "...he's happy too note that the brunette is silent." That's it, I hope that helps. |
unicornndragon chapter 1 . 12/22/2011 *squeal* omg! kyoya in specs *dies* |