I love this story!

I thought that this was a good chapter. I would read it if you made more chapters

Wow. Wow. Great job! So hot.

This was so hot. I would love to read more lemons from you ;)

to this day, this is the hottest harry/hermione smut I have found and I always come back to read it.

Very goood... can you make some James and Lily fics like this?

Please continue the story.

meh not bad but the whole leaping into sex thing is a bit much
still not bad

Omfg 3 loved

Awesome story. A sequel would be cool just to get the reactions of certain red heads.

The spelling is ridiculously terrible. As if done on purpose.

Hello dear.
You have done a very good job.
You describe a scene cut from live, even when you did go quite fast even for them.
Yes the now each other for years and yes the had some scares experience you still let them be quite bold.
Or is it the enormous need together with there absolute trust to let them move that fast all of a sudden?

Anyway a nice piece of work.

And it would be very interesting what happened in the next few month!

Wit the uproar of the redheads and the like...
It would be fun for sure...

I hope you can persuade your muse soon...

I liked this story a lot. Very little in the way of unnecessary dramatics or overemotional unrealistic angst. I genuinely felt like Harry and Hermione were two very mature adults who didn’t feel the need to act like they were having an illicit high school-esque hook up. It was frank and blunt and quite nice to read. Great sexually charged dialog…I say charged purposefully. It certainly wasn’t hardcore dirty talk, but very nice and realistic considering this was their first time together. Perhaps in time it could be more advanced.

I especially liked how with just a look they realized they were now a couple. That’s a whole different level of emotional intimacy on display there, forged by years of friendship and shared hardship and complete trust. It’s unusual to see an author not try to overplay that. More often than not they can’t help but write these kinds of scenes as if Harry and Hermione weren’t best friends since they were 11. More drama I suppose.

This was understated and soft and very well done. Thanks for a great read!

It started out interesting, right up until "cheeky thong." I don't want to insult you, but your use of technical terms is, to be honest, a serious mood killer. The only time I hear about labia minor is in my anatomy class. Speaking of, the urethra only deals with urine. Normally I don't review fics I don't like, but I genuinely want you to improve. Trust me, when you're having a sexy man eat you out the right way, you are not thinking about "vagina".

that was hot great story