Reviews for The Proposal |
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Star197 chapter 1 . 7/25/2015 Awww, I wish they would've did this in the show! |
Anonymous chapter 1 . 6/23/2015 Love it,soooooo much better than most of the stories. |
David Fishwick chapter 1 . 5/5/2015 Nice and thanks for writing |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/13/2014 Now this would have been so much better for the show |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/25/2012 That was really sweet. |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/8/2012 beautiful |
candyluvsu chapter 1 . 4/1/2012 Awww I loved it! So sweet. I was wondering if you knew the episode number and season where he proposes to her? I am looking for it. Well written. :) |
hannahs77 chapter 1 . 1/15/2012 How beautiful :) |
Brittm123 chapter 1 . 12/19/2011 I think you should of been with the creators of Winx club because that was so much better than the actual proposal. I literally just watched that episode yesterday and i wanted to cry...it was so terrible. Layla and Nabu got a wholee scene! Either way...this is great and great thinking rewriting the proposal! this was so cute and you captured their characters perfectly :) |
Gloxinia chapter 1 . 10/20/2011 So romantic I'm about to cry. God I'm getting a toothache, it's too sweet. I don't remember there being a proposal on the show but i may be wrong, or I could have skipped a episode accidentally but it doubt it's as good as this story, you should have written that part yourself. Great job on this adorable one-shot! There should be more as cute as this! |
Orange Starbursts chapter 1 . 9/9/2011 OMG! IT'S REALLY ROMANTIC! |
xxxMusarockz chapter 1 . 8/30/2011 This was so sweet! It made me smile. It was nicely written and the place he took her to was perfect for the proposal. Some ultra fancy place just wouldn't have been as romantic as the little cafe! And judging from you said about the real proposal on the show (I haven't seen s4) that just seemed stupid compared to this. I think the show just squeezes everything in because they don't have time to show things like this in detail. Anyway, awesome piece! Xxx |
Michelle Loves Chocolate 99 chapter 1 . 8/28/2011 Awww! This is defently going to my favorites! Oh and BTW, that might not have been a proposal on the show. Since he didn't say anything. SO you never know, maybe this is what the proposal is going to be like? IDK. Anyways this was a good story, better then mine! I enjoyed reading it! (and I hate reading, cause alomst nothing entertains me, and you did it so congradulations! or how ever you spell it) Thanks for writing this! I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories! (: |
Livienne chapter 1 . 8/27/2011 This was a really cute one-shot, I liked it very much. There were a few mistakes and I thought that in the middle of the text you kinda rushed a bit, but despite all of those, I enjoyed this little one-shot of yours a lot: it was small, yet really fluffy and nice, indeed. You did a really great job on your first fanfic if you ask me. Keep writing! - Eve |
angelalexandra chapter 1 . 8/27/2011 OMG! This is WAY BETTER than what happened on the show. I can't believe Brandon only pulled out a box on the episode. This is SOOOOOOO MUCH BETTER! You should have written the proposal bit for the show, you would have nailed it! THIS IS AWESOME! I can't believe this was your first fanfic, it is so awesomely written! You did a great job at writing the perfect proposal moment for Stella and Brandon. If I haven't said it before, I LOVE this one-shot. SO cute and awesome! WELL DONE! P.S sorry that it was so long, just wanted to say how awesome and romantic it was XD |