Fantastic story!

I hope that you have a great and blessed day/night!

I loved this but please try to make this a actual story or at least a 2nd chapter told by sonic

I liked it cos it shows a whole 'nother side to Sonic's origin as well as still sowing Eggman being a bad guy but he also has good intentions at times. I would love to see a oneshot of Sonic meeting Lightning. Wonder how that would turn out?

Awww, that's so sweet. I love this kind of fluff. Not sappy or slash, just bad guys in denial.

Aww so cute! Love this story

nice. he was cruel selfish and other stuff but he was sweet

Aww that was cute.

I like how Eggman got his name that was the cutest ever.

You know, I really liked this story.

Good job!

I liked it :D I found it easy to understand the character's intentions and you stayed on subject throughout the story.

I'd give it a 4.5/5 star rating, and I'm not even a sonic fan :)

Well done, Marigi ;-)

The longest one-shot ever is the BEST one-shot ever! I'm so proud that you wrote this, because I was wondering when you were gonna do something like this.

This was very well-written! It was very humorous and touching. And I had no idea that Sonic's real name was Olgilvie Maurice Hedgehog... my God I can't even pronounce that!

This was a very nice story, very cute.

So THAT'S why Sonic never dies...:D

Sonic is like that because he was first and the other hedgehogs are freaks XD

Shadow originally wasn't going to be a hedgehog, and Silver...um...let's not start about Silver...

Anyways, good job!

Aside from all of the horrifying parts, this has to be the cutest oneshot ever! I never thought the possibility of Eggman raising Sonic, and you made it; really well too!

Definetly a favorite :D