When sasuke thought hinata as weak but not so weak because she was from a clan and not entirely useless, I snorted and was like, "I see u speak from experience"

I’ve read several Naruto/Harry Potter crossovers and have had to drop them due to how they’re written. They almost never work out. With the team’s dynamics exaggerated and conversations just taking up room while Kakashi or Tsunade are depicted as near morons or just irresponsible.

It took away from the story and made having too many important characters gathered, a hassle. Too many people talking, switching perspectives, and just detailing appearances. A shame, really.

Your fic is THY FIRST I’ve come across that is well paced, focused, and not overly descriptive. Despite wishing Team Kakashi being present-I’m kinda hoping they’ll make an appearance in later chapters as backup or something-Sasuke and Hinata work well. A bit odd, but the story has a natural flow. I know if it’s you writing canon characters, it’ll be worth reading and I won’t have anything to worry about.

Fics that have Team Kakashi involved, generally focus on mending the rift Sasuke caused or having Sakura acknowledged by Sasuke. The only worthwhile fanfics with these two universes that are okay or have any substance, only involve Kakashi crossing over. Though it’s rare that wizards aren’t seen as fat, lazy, and inferior opponents. Thank you for acknowledging their potential strengths through Kakashi’s POV.

It’s clear you research and study both worlds in order to explain what you can and cannot use. A lot of work and time goes into each chapter, so I applaud you. I honestly hope this story isn’t abandoned or has been forgotten since I’m looking forward to and waiting for you next update.

Oof Sasuke wants a dragon? Wow. Can’t wait xD

This fanfic is epic. Very in character and your writing is also vey good. Can't whait for the rest :)

I’m very glad to have found this story, I haven’t read HP at all so I like the way you gradually reveal various aspects of the wizard world without it seeming forced.

Personally, I prefer Hinata’s POV, I see it as part of her character development to confront snape like that just for making a classmate cry (even she’s a sweet person she’s also a shinobi). Anyway, thank you for the amazing work!

Hey, your writing is amazing. I really like how you keep everyone in character. I especially like the aspect of this story where ninjas don’t immediately brand the wizards as useless. Keep up the good work!

Ah yes, the things Snape did up until book 7 are typically forgotten in light of, oh he was in love! No. Snape is still a jerk. Not to say that I'm a good person and he's not, it's just silly that people throw his other character traits out the window after one sob story about his love life.

Kakashi interacting with Rita is always a joy.

Did Snape try to read Hinata's mind? Can he? or are ninja minds different somehow? Or did Dumbledore make him swear not to read a student's mind for any reason? If nothing else, Snape is going to report this question to Dumbledore.

I feel like asking Snape straight out probably wasn't the most tactful way of going about that mystery. Still, they can always play the "silly foreigner" card. Hopefully they don't try asking Moody about his irregularities. That could backfire horribly.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Well, I'm sure one should start with a brief greeting, and that kind of thing. So ... Hey! Hello!

Recently (today) I came across this little gem, saying that it is entertaining when reading is underestimation, it has been fun, interesting and entertaining.

I did not imagine that I would ever read a combination of the Harry Potter Saga and Naruto, it did not even cross my mind. Even so, here I am!

It is amazing the development, which has not felt forced or disorganized, I almost feel very bad for the other readers who read you five years ago and waited with real patience your return (laughs). Needless to say, maybe I'm lucky at that point. I really hope to continue reading about this story, and to know how you will develop it.

In my opinion, he has handled Sasuke's attitude well, he is a sullen and unfriendly being, even that is nice. I like how it is portrayed, and the interactions as already mentioned are harmonious with each other.

Hinata and Kakashi are not left behind in your narrative, it's great (!)

I would like to expand on everything that I liked, but I still risk not expressing it well. You see and I have not mentioned that I do not handle English very well (nervous laughter), even so I wanted to leave a comment.
I will be waiting with the patience of a Shinobi for the update. I want to know how Sasuke gets to want a dragon. (What a thrill!)

Oohh, I'm absolutely loving this so far. Hinata telling Snape off was something I didn't know I needed until, well, THIS. And Sasuke wants a dragon? Ooft, I can't imagine how THAT's gonna turn out... *envisions Sasuke blowing a great fireball at the dragon in order to counter the dragon's firebreath; massive explosions ensue*

Okay so I'm very excited about this fic. It's a different take on the shinobi go to Hogwarts that I haven't seen and it's so well written. I love your choice of Sasuke and Hinata, it makes sense and was wonderfully explained. Also your portrayal of Hinata is glorious and I can't wait to see how the story progresses!

petition to give sasuke a dragon (also love the fic, great that youve started working on it again, cant wait for more 3 )

I love this so much! Your writing is so amazing!

I never liked Naruto fics with Sasuke without Naruto, it's weird for some reason and there's no one there to break Sasuke's brooding which can be a bit much at times.
However you made it work. You made Sasuke not annoying and I actually like him here!
You're story telling is also superb. I was lost in your story since the first chapter, the way you write the Harry Potter world through shinobi's eyes makes me feel like I'm also seeing it the first time even though I probably know the world inside out.
I love your fic and I am eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

I really don’t think Orochimaru would be interested in joining Voldemort. Maybe to stab him in the back at the end, but for the cause? No. Orochimaru is too intelligent for that. He kills for knowledge and power, NOT just for the heck of it, nor because he believes one race is superior to other. For him, all humans are equal, and the ones with bloodlines are the most valuables. If he were on Voldemort’s shoes, he would not just kill half-bloods and muggle born, just for the mere fact that their magical population is simply TOO DAMN SMALL FOR ANY SORT OF WORLD DOMINATION! Voldemort is an idiot, maybe has a few screws loose for all the shit he did to his own soul. Orochimaru would eat him alive

I'm not generally a fan of stories where Sasuke fails to defect, but this is really good. Great read. I hope you update soon.