First of all, THE TITLES. I LOVE YOU. Second, have I mentioned how much I love the daddies? They are just amazing :) You know, I'm just gonna give up trying to number this because there are too many things I love in this story! Brace yourself, this will be a long review...and a little spastic (I worked out what I wanted to talk about while I was reading it, so this may seem scatterbrained). So here are just a few moments I loved!

Harmony broke my heart with the Mommy talk. "Mommy is magical." *tears* On a side note, I loved how they started pairing off their kids. It's honestly only a matter of time before that happens, am I right? I love how you still stuck to the fact that WILL HAS THE BEST QUOTES. "Better looking." "Yeah...hey!" LOL loved that part! Honestly, Will is such an awesome character. Awesomest daddy is Will. Also, I don't know how you made it possible for me to love Tunny even more *cough* you know exactly what I'm talking about *cough*, you get him to sing to his daughter, AND make her a secret garden! Best daddy has to go Tunny...not to mention (in my opinion) the hottest ;) BUT Johnny makes for a hilarious Daddy! The Barbie voice? I could TOTALLY imagine him doing that! Funny daddy is Johnny. But Jimmy is such a special daddy who has changed so much! It warms my heart 3 It's so sweet to see him with his daughter like that. Actually for ALL the characters, it's so sweet to see them as parents!

Other random stuff I loved? The "family environment" where you take kids alcohol shopping (LOL xD), the Esper special, drinking coffee through a straw, grown up apple juice...and the cookie dough! Seriously, if I was a kid (actually I would do this now, too) and someone offered me cookie dough, I would GET ON THAT. COOKIE DOUGH IS ALL SORTS OF DELICIOUS!

My favourite moment? THE TEA PARTY. MY GOODNESS WHAT I WOULD PAY TO SEE THAT! Seriously, there are no words. So I hope you enjoy your SUPER long review, and great job! *gives...a Declan cookie this time ;)*

noooooo! the last chapter...*sniffs* Well, it was a good one! I loved this story. I hope u write more american idiot stories maybe some ooc ones? (if u don't like, that's okay)

Loved this so much!

-Kylelover101

I am so sad that this is over it is really cute!

It's over? AWWWWWWW! This was adorable! I think my favorite part was the ending with the girls admiring the guys shirtless ;) personally in terms of muscle I saw Tun-Tun wins, but in overall AMAZINGNESS Johnny Cakes wins!

I'm gonna miss this story, but I can't wait for whatever you write next! :)

WHATSHERNAME: isn't the Nintendo a 90's thing?

Kylelover101: Fuck no it isn't! I still play it. I loved that part!

:3 up-date soon please

THEO. (dun dun DUNNNNNN!) All the kids are so adorable and the boys are such adorable parents! Especially Johnny! But that may have to do with my unhealthy crazed obsession with Johnny :)

PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD UPDATE FASTER! I'M TEARING MY HAIR OUT IT IS SO FUCKING GOOD. SO MANY CLIFFHANGERS. JIMMY. GIRL'S BATHROOM. THEO. GAHHHHHHHHHHHH. MOOOOOOOOOOOORE

"Apple juice, grown up apple juice" -YES. Hahaha that was genius! Oh Willy-poo! *heart*

Hehehe Jimmy and his magic touch! I wouldn't mind some of that, if you catch my drift ;)

Gahh I love this! Please update soon!

You have no idea how eagerly I was waiting for this XDDD

This is fueling my SaintJesus kick *hearts*

I think Johnny should be all like "Oh yeah, I'm fine" but in the insdie have the whole thing eating at him.

Jimmy's more ok with. Jimmy's used to waking up with random people naked next to him. XD

Loooooooooove it!

update SOOOOON!

LOL, such a funny chapter, they had hangovers and this reminds me of when I asked my aunt why she had a headach and she told me that she drank too much "adult apple juice" LOL Such a funny chapter it broguht back memories.

up-date soon please.

So that SaintJesus kiss...is that gonna evolve into anything? I'm in the mood for some lovin' from them :D

But seriously whatever way you go with this story, I'm sure it's gonna be totally awesome :)

SO. MUCH. LOVE.

I want cookies...Heather can you make me some?

Heather: Hell no...

PLEASE?

Will: PLEASE?

Heather: WTF?

Will: I want cookies...

Heather:...

SaintJesus! YAAAAAAAY! I can't wait til they wake up the next day and realize what happened XDD

Update soon girlie!

Aw! So sweet! I loved the Jimmy-Harmoney bonding, I wish to see some of the kids bonding with their parents soon.

Up-date soon please.

Is this some foreshadowing of SaintWhatsername I detect? Oooh dramaaaaa! Hold on, lemme get my popcorn!

So incredibly adorable! Update soooooon!

. SAINTWHATSERNAME

Now I was really expecting some SaintJesus there...oh my god...those two...I haven't read an really really good SaintJesus in forever...no one really writes them much (

...idea? XDD Nah, you take it where you want.

This is so freakin' adorable! Love it!