I havent read many ones where he gets sick only because to me, its not something that should happen but your summary caught my attention. I wasnt disappointed either. That was a very good way to do it. I didnt see how the berries were to be gotten but that was a nice twist.

no gonna lie, I was close to crying. I love those story and would read it over and over again!

Great story. Love it.

Omg this is just bootiful, I really liked the way you planned out the entire story and it was really well thought it, I think that using angel tears was a good idea but holy water would have been more deadly XD but even so it was a really nice story. Thank you :P

I've been reading some of your Kuroshitsuji one-shots and all I could say is that I'm simply in love: with your creative writing, your imagination in the entire plot, with the details such as explaining events from Sebastian's past and nature... The characters are also very in line and their romantic relationship, subtle yet strong, develops so naturally that you can just think: "yeah, that's what had to happen", and still feel surprised by that way it happens, partly because of the mentioned details. Not only you manage to create an interesting short plot, but also expand the world of the characters by intermingling information and events in just one chapter. I loved that you even gave a bright clue of an angel's nature and granted Sebastian a whole new outlook with his past celestial link.

Sorry for the long review and the possibles errors, English is not my first language. I'd like to ask you: may I translate two of your one-shots into Spanish? I'd love to translate this one, "That Butler, Sick" and "Forgotten Birthday", as I'm sure that many Spanish speakers would truly enjoy them. Of course, with all links and credits given, only to be published in this platform.

Thanks so much for sharing your beautiful writing

Beautiful. Very creative and original. I look forward to reading more of your work.

This is good.

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OH MEH GAWD THIS IS SO GOOD, EXCEPT THE PART WHERE CEIL HAD TO KISS HIM XD :3 BTW I don't always talk in caps :3 XD

Oh boy... XD And so their sexy relationship starts to begin! XD

Haha the fact that tears could kill a demon is funny... but it's imagination! Loved the story, keep up the good work!

F*****G HELL! YOU ALMOST KILLED SEBASTIAN! YOU'RE CRAZY! I LOVE IT!

Such an amazing story! And such a sweet ending...!

You, sir or ma'am, are a wonderful author, and are gifted with a great talent! Awesome job! :D

I like how for once, Ciel realizes that his treatment of Sebastian does have consequences. It's always unnerved me a little that Sebastian just takes Ciel's abuse with a smile. Maybe it's a demon thing...?

Anyway, great work with this story!

awesome keep going