Your story lacks plot. You are basically copying word by word of the show and adding tiny bits of dialogue to fit Rose in it, which aren't very good anyway. Get a grip and use better ideas.

I really loved this. I don't know if you plan to write more, but I wouldn't be opposed. This certainly works as a stopping point. Thanks for sharing your hard work. Have a nice day!

This seriously so amazing! Def the best Impossible Astronaut au I’ve read. I love Rose but she did have her annoyingly immature moments that make me struggle seeing her and the Doctor together in reality- however you managed to COMPLETELY FIX THAT with this fic. You matured her while still keeping her Rose and it is AWESOME! If they were ever to bring Rose back she needs to be like this!

I know you probably won’t update this since it’s been so long and you might not even read reviews anymore (you could be dead!) but I thought just in case you should know how much I enjoyed it and how much I would enjoy more

I know it’s ben ages, but please update it’s so good! I absolutely adore this story and would love to see more!

I don't think I'm just speaking for myself when I say, Y.

Again, amazing writing. And oh my gosh! That whole scene of "saving Rose" with all the regeneration, and including the 12th Doctor and Clara! That blew my mind, I didn't think this fic would include him.

Okay, wow. What a chapter. I love how you write these characters so. Freaking. Much. This dance, the implications, "causality loops" and everything. Wow.
I love the idea of this monument that keeps getting additions of love and loves lost.
I haven't watched the show in ages, so I don't recall any of these places in the show - but I'm assuming you came up with these ideas, characters. Props to you, if I'm right.

Gah I can never find the perfect words to describe how much I love this fic. So much in single chapters!
I personally stopped watching the show a religiously as I did with Tennant, although I do love Smith almost as much. So if that galaxy thing was in the show and I missed it? - wow, I need to see that.

But if it was all just you, like... good skies, that was beautiful. Fantastic, dare I say.

I love how Rose's love isn't something easily dismissed (cause it ain't when it's real, yo), but because she doesn't want to cause drama, wants to be on good terms with everyone, she does her best to stay in the friendzone. They work just as good as a couple, as they do best friends, as they do just friends (doesn't mean I ship RosexEleven any less though. Sorry River, you cool, but you ain't Rose Tyler cool... imo).
I love how the Doctor touches on the fact he needs someone to call him out, as well. Seriously, the relationships in this fic are handled so well. Although the focus is mainly on the Rose and the Doctor (amazingly well written), the others (though brief) are cool for what they are and I love it.

I am so happy with this fic. It makes sense for the most part, and I am so happy that Rose is "backing off" and that this didn't turn into a catty-jealousy fic. Rose is mature, and she wants to like and be liked by everybody.
I love the relationships and characterization - on point and so much fun. Bless for this fic, I'm glad it's not over, even though I'd be fine with that too.

really love this awesome story cant wait for brand new chapters

So, this is a decent story. I know it's been ages, I doubt it'll ever get updated again, but I just wanted to offer my one bit of criticism. The weakest point of this story is absolutely the chapter transitions. Every chapter ends and takes up somewhere 15% of the way into the next one. Nothing is ever resolved, there's never a denouement or calming down period. It just instantly goes every time from the height of the tension to "everything's been fine for hours now" and picks up there, only referencing the ending of the previous chapter later. It gives the whole affair a really dissatisfying feeling in that regard.

Otherwise, quite an interesting story.

please update this story soon! please!

I love it

this is an incredible story im so pleased i stumbled across it thank you for writing it!

"Rose didn't want to risk her future friendship with the other woman"

Rose and River were friends in your story? Really? I'm honestly not sure if I've been reading a different story then. River seemed to ignore Rose at best, and was actively rude the rest of the time.

Wow, that's powerful. Really amazing.