I know this story is old, and probably nobody is gonna see this comment, but man, it really starts to get funny how Sharpner is getting super jealous of Gohan but isn't showing it.

Oy! -poke- Continue this sometime!

Can you please update the story again, I know it has been years but please update it. I would love to see how the fan girls get their hearts smashed to tine tiny little bits. I would also like to know if Gohan and Videl would handel everything else. and who would win the tournament... please update again I'm really begging.

I enjoyed the read! Thank you!

So first off I want to say I hope everything in your RL is going okay and nothing's happened, I know how muses can up and leave your for years at a time from personal experience so I won't rush you to continue this other then to say I would enjoy it if you did so

Second off I want to let you know that I have greatly enjoyed these stories of yours (part one and two) Your style of writing is really fun, and easy to follow. The fight scenes you have included are well done and seem realistic (as far a a DBZ fight can be realistic anyway Oo)

Third off I thought you might like to know that I found part one by looking for DBZ stories in English, any rating, complete only sorting using favorites it is number 14 out of all DBZ stories in these categories. I thought that was pretty good :D just thought it would show how many other people love your stories :D

Hope everything is good,
toramonger

shame this is dead

Jin reminds me of that one annoying little shit from The Polar Express.

pleas updated your story soon. I would love to know what happens next. will Videl finally get it through the other girls in the group's head's that they can't win Gohan away from her. I would also like to know how the ball will play out. so I'm begging you for an update ASAP...

is this alive

When will the next chapter be out you haven't updated in like 3 years lol we're waiting

Is this going to be continuing

He already told her his moms father was the ox king

This is a fantastic story, please don't be dead so you can come back and finish it!

*sigh* Damn shame this is... this was a great story while it lasted. I suppose it ain't gettin updates then...

I don't get it, I mean, you said that you will continue in june. it has been three years, are you going to continue?