Is it finished? Or is there more coming? I'm so glad you kept working on it and managed to stay true and make it wholesome..if you know what I mean. Some writers style change over the years or the story changes. Yours feels the same from the beginning until now. I hope there us more, been one of my favorite stories for so many years. Is the slumbering Malandro also getting more chapters?

I keep coming back to this story for a quick good read. I like the direction Light and Fang's relationship is going. Honestly, I like where you stopped because it leaves a lot open for the reader to think about. If you do come back to this, I like the pace and the character development of the ladies you have laid out. I'm sure life is keeping you going and I hope you find your muse again. Thanks for your work!

Aw, c'mon, you gotta finish this! It's been over a year since the last update!

My imagination is improving because of you.

It's interesting to read a story where the starting point is an unhealthy relationship. I quite liked the angle, and even if it was sometimes painful watching them screw up, I think it made for a very rewarding climax when they finally fixed things. There was just so much relief when they finally figured out how to communicate and do something other than inadvertently hurt each other.

I also fully support lightning in throwing a table at that guy. He deserved it.

Anyway, even if this doesn't end up being finished it was good to see the major issues largely resolved, and Fang and Lightning finally having fun again. This chapter makes for a decent 'unofficial' ending all considered, and I had a lot of fun reading the story, even if Fang and Lightning were a little bit hopeless.

Thanks for all the great work!

Come back, please, where are you? Dont deceive me, I beg you

PLEASE continue thisawesome stuff!

More please?

Damn I've been reading this since chapter one. Six years. Always worth the wait. This has always been of of my favorites :) thanks

I think I hate fang in this fanfic. If I were Lightning, I'd probably just steer clear of her.

Ahhhhh good to have you back! Looking forward to more!

Oh god I've waited for this for so long I legit cried when I saw you updated. Jesus christ I'm ecstatic

so happy to see this back!

I'm so happy I could genuinely cry

Woo hoo! That was such a sweet first dateLightning was just so cute and Fang was just soooo cutegah, I loved it so much. I would like to add that I empathise with Lightning, if Fang had put her panties on my shoulder I think my head would have exploded, although it seems like Lightning is about to get her own back on Fang for embarrassing her so much. Brilliant written and very sweet. Looking forward to your next update.

I love it! It was so worth the wait!.. now I can sleep happily.. more please more