Reviews for The Sacrifice |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I loved the whole story and writing style. Basic plot that was truly enjoyable! But THEN it ended with a line that was not suited for it. Something like "but that did not matter to me, as my consciousness was quietly fading into oblivion" or something like that. Sad to say that the ending was enough to totally kill the mood the that had built up over the course of the tale. as youtuber Grarkada says, the ending is paramount |
![]() ![]() ![]() o3o' sorry to bother but quick question, are you still taking requests to write pokemon x human fanfics? not to point out the obvious (could I request one) |
![]() ![]() This is a fantastic story my word did I feel moved for her. You are definitely yanking those chains at the heart when you drew me to her. I loved the way you made her life so fascinating. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hee, I love this story already and hope it continues if it's not a one shot. I love Sazandara 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hee, I love this story already and hope it continues if it's not a one shot. I love Sazandara 3 |
![]() ![]() Is it up to us to decide what happened afterwards? |