I hate that she’ll be changed under these circumstances, and what that means for Charlie, especially, but it dies make sense. And I like that they’re respecting her enough to do it.

It does one off a little anti Edward at times, although I didn’t think it did so much in this chapter. The thing is, when you take into account Myer’s ‘mate’ concept, his actions make some sense. But when you change it up, and we see Bella and Jasper grieving but working through it and moving on, it is harder to feel sympathy for him.
Alice is a little different. I’m presuming that In that moment she saw that there was a possibility if her success, but that if she failed, everyone would eventually be happy anyway. Well, everyone except her and Edward. So in effect she sacrificed her own life and the family’s temporary happiness, for Bella’s long term happiness.

Loved this chapter

So glad I found this well written story! I really like it so far! Can't stop crying!

Wow, congrats on your 4.0, even though I realise it was years ago now!
I'm so glad Jake imprinted. It makes for this possibility of a great relationship for him and Jasper, but also gives Bella the chance to come to terms with her mixed feelings for him.

Well, that made me cry again, a little. Rosalie's reaction was what did it. It was just so... Idk. Heart warming and wrenching at the same time.

I did really like this chapter, and wondered if you were as familiar with the area as you sounded (or if it was all just made up!). So that bookshop's real then?

Gosh, I cried all the way through that chapter, but most especially when Carlisle has to tell Charlie what had happened.

I love this story but I just imagined something, though This chapter is perfect as is...as jasper and Bella say goodbye and leave the clearing, in the wind, too faint for them to hear was both Alice and Edward saying goodbye and I love you.

I honestly cannot tell you how refreshing it is to read a story where vampires and wolves can get along, and not only get along with each other but actually be friends. It’s very very very nice.

this was great thanks for sharing

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Another great chapter. This one brought tears to my eyes as well, but not as much as the funeral chapter. Keep up the good work.

Another great chapter. Keep up the good work.

This was kind of a confusing chapter as far as some of the POV's went. For example, this last part, where Carlisle is talking to Charlie, at first I thought it was Jasper and Charlie talking but then, maybe half-way through the scene, I realized it was Carlisle's POV. To keep it from being too confusing I would go back and put who's POV it is at the beginning of each chapter or scene. It would make it so much easier for the reader to know who's POV the chapter/scene is in. Keep up the good work.