Wow! I really wasn't expecting that last bit! That's an interesting way to explain how magic would be possible with rules like in Fullmetal alchemist. I almost got chills for a moment. I'm exited to see where it goes from here and I can't wait for Ed to find out more about horcruxes. I feel like he'll probably be pretty mad when he finds out about Harry.
Great story! keep up the good work

holy shit

i realize that its unlikely you'll ever decide to continue this, but i just wanted to let you know that your story has been a gift to read! its very different from the others ive read so far, and its clear that a lot of time and energy and love was put into this! thank you for sharing

hey man
are you gonna finish this
please?
its really good.
but if you dont want to, i guess thats okay, too.

This is absolutely beautiful and I desperately hope there are more chapters soon! I think that that explanation of the stone was great! It's a way better explanation than I could ever come up with, that's for sure and I totally didn't expect it! I really want to see the reaction of some of the characters if they ever find out though. That would definitely be interesting, to say the least. Please update this soon! I need to know what happens next!

I know that this is not very helpful, but this was the best HP/FMA story I have read so far. The little things made me laugh, and the magic explanation was very good, and made a lot of sense. Anyways, I hope at some point this will return, though I do not have a ton of hope. Have a good day, and thank you for this story.

It's funny, right before reading this I was thinking to myself how Edward and Severus would probably get along fairly well if they ever met. I love the way you wrote their friendship!

**********deep breath out********** Wow... honestly, this chapter was...really deep, especially that last part. Just...wow. Can't wait for the next chapter!

It always alarms me a little when I find a fic that's been abandoned like this, with no sign of the creator anywhere else.

This has got to be one of the more interesting takes on the HPxFMA idea, and especially... Ooo ESPECIALLY your take on how magic and alchemy work. How delightfully dark!
Your pacing is impeccable, your dialogue natural and enjoyable, and I think Snape and Ed's friendship is something I'll treasure for years, along with his and Hermione's. God, you had a ton of good things going here.
I hope, wherever you are, you're doing well, and equivalent exchange is giving you back the happiness you've given.

This story is fantastic. Things are logical and well-thought- out. I totally agree with you that Ed would be impatient with Dumbledore's everything in its time strategy and would take the initiative to solve things on his own. On the small chance that you ever read this review; I am hoping the story will be continued.

Love it please continue this story soon I really really like it

This is beautifully, wonderfully dark. This is the sign of a good FMA fic; nothing comes without a price.

Please come back to this story. I love it.

This is very well written. I know it’s unlikely for you to continue since the last update was years ago... however, would like you to know I’ve enjoyed it very much! I can hope you would finish this someday

;-;

The accent has begun...