Really intriguing story. Lots of interesting stuff going down.

Not exactly an ideal way to appear somewhere new but it seems like it could lead to some interesting situations. Looking forward to seeing where you will take it from here.

Good but I hate the swear words . Especially and particularly 'f*ck' and ...hole.

shame you dropped this

MORE!

great story

Colette is such a sweetheart, gushing over a small fox like that. If Naruto changed the color of his fur he might be able to pass himself off as a different fox. The only question is whether or not he could keep his mouth shut.

The people of Mizuho seem to have forgotten it was THEY who made the monster that assailed their home. Just saying.

this is a great story i hope u continue it

Huh, pretty good. Keep it up, I look forward to the next chapter.

Ok turth be told that was hard to read and i know i should read it all but it feels pointlessly sad hes kept druged against his will and is going to be sent away to a living but at the last mountion he will be saved and for some half-assed reason help move the main plot along. just feels wrong im fine with his body beening harmed or cut apart but once its a mattered of the mind its like oh my god why arent we dead yet?. my review is pointless but no fear or anger just a very small sense of being confused from nartuo.

Awesome hope u update this.

A overall so far

I love this fic!Looking forward to an update

That was an interesting way of Naruto meeting Colette and the others and loved the funny scenes in this chapter.

I wonder if Zelos is gonna be jealous of Naruto since he is traveling with Sheena.