Oh wow, I am super hyped to read this story! It's not often you come across an Invader Zim fanfiction that isn't about romance/ships - or any fanfiction, for that matter. I'm so glad I stumbled upon this gem, I'll be sure to enjoy it!

With that said, the prologue looks very promising. I love the way you write, and I feel you stay well within the characters' personalities. Great job!

*Gathering her thoughts* ... The story was ... dark, yet good. I loved that you took Zim changing slowly. Zim, Dib, and Gaz getting along slowly/realistically, too. :D Thank you for writing this. :)

*Shivers heavily* Lovely, the psycho sits at parks watching KIDS. -_-;

Awwwwwwwwwww! :'3

I'm not usually a person of violence, but I'm with ZIM on this one.

*Hearts in her eyes* Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! :D

O.o ... Is Zim a ghost-magnet or something!? xD Poor Zim.

... Not sure how I feel about Ms. Bitters being a litteral DEMON, but she IS creepy and I AM curious; so I'll bite. :)

OW! I smacked my forehead more times I could count while reading this chapter

Can I adopt Gaz? Pretty please?

Good superior powers, Dib is such a dork.. an endearing dork

You put HIM? in the position of the Reaper? Holy Ammut (Anubi's assistant, eater of evildoers), fitting as heck! Slightly jarring tho

Are you... sassing Vasquez? Golly!

May I join the hug?

I correct myself: VERY jarring: he's insanely IC

Your A/N are always a delight to see, yanno?And it feels nice to be told stuff you already know in a new format

I like them, they're sassy

And you are too

I am imagining the computer emitted a burst of spluttering static,

"cheek to cheek" I needed some comedy

I don't know what to say, except that Zim is not the only tseething (I hold nothing against you, just against the persone whose story you are telling)

Gaz killed him. Or stuffed him in the closet

*groan* math, my archenemy

The dynamic duo in action, lads, gents and nonbinary

as long as ya keep yerself in check

Oh. *laughter snort* Reallly?

Second hand crush, poor Zimmy

Gaz! Dib!

Oww (I facepalmed a couple of times, and doing so with glasses on is a PAIN)

Effective alarm indeed

Ohhhhhhhh *list of expletives that would make Nny tape my mouth shut* you did it this time

Ominous

to the author note: boh? the characters are them, I don't exactly use "a model sheet" while imagining them. It's more like hearing their voices? There are some vivid flashes (Dib in the bush) but nothing definite

If you think it's bad, oooh BOY
Shuddup, Ches

There was a study that said you "absorb" traits from literari characters, but not like this!

I am starting to get the creeps about my "reverse dejavu" now

can it, spacedad

spot on sibling banter

Oh carp, did you have Pratchett's ghost on your shoulder?

the full saying goes "the blood of the covenant is thicker than the water of the womb", soo

too little too late; he already has GIR

*flails like a dead fish* o

About the A/N of friggin course the creepy gal is at her strongest while one of her organs is literally tearing itself apart, really, it's frighteningly IC

Phantom Pain, owwww
Ohhh Schist, how oblivious can one be?