i like this!

I've actually read this story 3-4 times over. I love it. I absolutely do. Your portrayal of the characteristics great. Thank you so much for sharing. Truly.

The story is good but after fifteen chapter it become repetitive... Cloud asleep, Sephiroth flirt with him, Zack is worried, end of chapter, Cloud asleep, Sephiroth flirt with him again, Zack is worried again, end of chapter...

fucking waist of time reading. wish I would have never bothered at all.

Mmm... I must admit it, the fic is something else... That ending tho...
Lol, wtf
But overall it's good...
Mmmm...
Honestly im speechless

I know a lot are bothered by the jarring flashbacks but i personally appreciate them because it shows how damaged Cloud's psyche is. especially that this is his third go around, there's bound to be a herculean amount of mental and emotional damage to having to live, fight, suffer and fail time and time again not knowing if your best was good enough or whether there was even peace at the end of this long and arduous road.

Im currently still reading the 7th chapter but im excited to discover if Cloud would heal or would he snap?

Villains are heroes who live long enough to be turned into monsters and even God's perfect angels, being tasked to protect and perform his bidding, can fall.

I'm sorry. This would've been a good read if it weren't for the constant flashbacks going on... I know it's only been five chapters so far, but it's honestly annoying. It's really unnecessary to add flashbacks in every freaking paragraph in almost every freaking chapter (i mean yeah, I've only read five chaps so far, but the flashbacks containing it is just too much for my taste, and I'm dreading if there's more for the rest of the 41 chaps, and it's not really working for me, it's only sucking out the enjoyment of my reading)

Reno got drunk. He managed to say everything poor cloud is experiencing, and hit the head on the nail about their creation. Congratulations! Reno receives: DEATH!

The constant flashbacks make it nauseating to read even when I skip over them. I understand they make it more realistic, consideration his situation, but it happens so often it's disorientating and I simply can't force myself to read another chapter.

Reno broke the fourth Wall,!

Thank you for writing this beautiful ffic :') made me both sad and happy, yet never tired to read all chaps straight. Its great that this ff changed your life too. words is life in book afterall, affecting people who read and write it. I refound my love for ff7 again and just found your ff .Its a beautiful one :). one more time,Thabk you

Note to self: when Reno gets drunk, he breaks the fourth wall.
I love this guy;he's so fuckin funny!

Woah...that was deep! Great job! Reno was my favorite and oddly Tseng/Cloud...just woah...WOW.

If Reno died then my soul went with him *sniffles pitifully* TT

Very unsatisfying ending.