bruh next pls

who is Kanojo and Koibito ?

Uh.. I'm gonna just... Pretend I never read this.

I’m feeling kinda aaaaawwwkwaaaaarrrrrd...

Oh wow. And I thought I rushed character relationships from the start of a story. I’ve never actually cringed so early before. Sorry but I just feel this is badly written. Hope it gets better when I come back to it

That's gotta be the fastest character engagement (romantically) that I've ever seen, I mean that was astoundingly speedy, how did naruto go from just noticing she's hot to saying that he loves her

Annoying how much you try to make ten ten narutos equal in terms of power. Makes no fucking sense. Story is so bland and lacks description . Like what the fuck do they both look like.

Awesome

Thats was, oh my god. Amazing. Very skilled. That story is in my top 3 of the entirety of naruto fanfiction and not just in romance. Ever and ive read maybe 50 or 60. This was truly amazing and i felt so much. The way you write is incredible. The story was spectacular bot a single boring or dull part. I just lived naruto and tenten. It was very cute. Cant put it into words. I see that the last update was nearly 8 years ago... i really want this story to proceed. I t was just so amazing. Please if you read this i hope you can keep writing this. I am blown away but how great it was. Think about proceeding to write with the lovingness and amazingness(lol) you have shown. I would be greatful to a very great extent. You may have also left us on a cliff without know what did happen to madara and naruto with his hokage business. I think i speak for almost everyone who read, Please continue!

With respect, you fanffic was certainly one of a kind and spectacular. Most enjoy to read,
Goodbye

It's a good start, but would they really be as passionate toward each other so early in their relationship? In my experience, true love has to start small and then grow, but going from just a crush by Tenten, to full blown love sounds a little far-fetched.

Unlike some people I actually like this. While it is true them getting together right now went by fast, I say it doesn't matter, because we have a naruto and Tenten pairing. We don't get a lot of those that much.

Well this was interesting and Sasgay really thinks he can take on Naruto when he barely even used 15% of his power that will be amusing to see as Sasgay becomes a nobody

Well I must say that was amusing but strange that Pein wasn't tougher but Naruto is like awesome at the moment

Well this was highly amusing Tenten turned Kisame into Sushi lol

Well that was highly amusing how did I forget about this story 2 down more schmucks to go