Reviews for Ordinary Girl
Forevergleek9615 chapter 21 . 5/21/2019
I know it’s been ages since you’ve last updated this. But I just noticed a mistake. A few chapters a go you said that Rachel was sixteen and Quinn was 18, yet in this chapter, in the time jump, Quinn is in senior year. How can she be in senior year if a year earlier she was 18?
VoluntarilyHere chapter 32 . 1/21/2018
i know chapter 32 was never meant to be the ending, but it served as a pretty good one nonetheless. I felt like it tied up a lot of the loose ends in terms of Quinn's future and her sense of self worth. I liked how easily Rachel and Quinn resolved the issue of Rachel wanting to get a job. It was a nice little conversation that really showed their growth as a couple. The smut in this fic was awesome, really sexy stuff. I hope you and your wife are doing well. Thanks for writing this!
tknorth92 chapter 32 . 12/19/2017
Literally years and I still come back to read this story. Hooe it crosses your mind one day to pick it back up again.
pia.oliveras chapter 32 . 9/13/2017
I dont know why you quit. Sorry for my english. Im from Argentina and I loved this story. I hope you one day continue and finish :)
Hii chapter 32 . 7/14/2017
5 years but hopefully you'll update again
bt05 chapter 32 . 3/12/2017
i hope u write more soon
me9beautiful chapter 32 . 7/16/2016
Hi why u stop writing ?
plz come back and finish dis one its a excellent story and deserve a gud ending plzzzzz
Guest chapter 32 . 5/14/2016
Please come back and finish this story it's really good
Guest chapter 32 . 1/23/2016
Come backkkkk!
Guest chapter 32 . 7/9/2015
Please finish this story!
Guest chapter 32 . 4/11/2015
Please come back and write.
I love the story line and your writing.
There are a few mistakes from what I've read but they are few to non existent.
And your A/Ns about you and your wife and son are nice. Makes you seem more real in a way.
So please reaturtn to writing this story and hopefully more.
Demenafan12 chapter 32 . 3/20/2015
Update soon
Guest chapter 32 . 2/11/2015
i know im super late to the game but this fic is amazing! legit in my top 3
Guest chapter 11 . 1/14/2015
Awww...im so imotional now.
Red Ready chapter 11 . 12/13/2014
Oh my God this last scene actually made me cry and tell u I never cry not while reading. Quinn sounds so cute praying to God for her son's life.
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