Reviews for Fine Lines
Guest chapter 9 . 10/19/2014
I love it so much u should make more
kaji13 chapter 9 . 9/10/2014
I definitely believe that eventually, Spirit develops a grudging respect for Soul and for what he's done and means to Maka. You did a good job portraying that here
kaji13 chapter 8 . 9/10/2014
Awww Soul :( NOT worthless!
kaji13 chapter 7 . 9/10/2014
I love BlackStar so much hahaha (he's my secret favorite as well)
kaji13 chapter 5 . 9/10/2014
Hand condoms hahahah
waytheballbounces chapter 9 . 1/6/2014
I love this ending. It makes perfect sense that Soul would honor Maka's effort as well.
randomcat23 chapter 9 . 12/16/2013
A nice way to end it. I really enjoyed how you portrayed the relationship between the 3 characters. Could use more fics like this out there!

Good work and good luck with future projects!
randomcat23 chapter 8 . 12/16/2013
Ah I love this. I mean, it's incredibly sad, but it speaks a lot about Soul's character, and well, his relationship with Maka.

Stop punching me in the heart, please?

Okay, actually, don't. This angst is perfectly written.
randomcat23 chapter 7 . 12/16/2013
Blackstar never fails to make me laugh. And the timing is perfect...my goodness the image in my head is hilarious. I wonder if Soul can outrun Spirit?

Nicely done.
randomcat23 chapter 6 . 12/16/2013
:) Love it. This seems like something Spirit would do.
randomcat23 chapter 5 . 12/16/2013
BWahaa.

This is just perfect. I agree with you, this MUST be what happened.

Hand condoms.

Ha, that definitely made me chuckle. I'm loving Soul and Spirit's similarities! And it was nice to see Maka thankful for something Spirit did for her.
randomcat23 chapter 4 . 12/16/2013
I'm really enjoying these little chapters. I particularly enjoyed this one. Soul and Spirit's interaction is just great. I can't wait to read more!
Tenbris chapter 9 . 9/12/2013
I love the interactions between Spirit and Soul in general, and there aren't enough good Spirit stories out there! Great job!
The-City-Burns chapter 9 . 7/9/2013
I really like this story, it's unique, I haven't read many stories like it so far, keep up the good work
scorpioneldar chapter 5 . 4/11/2013
knowing all of them i have no doubt you are right
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