Just beautiful and sad. Love your style of writing this. The description of Goku and the Goddess talking was perfectly Goku. And Gojyo's soul... And then his talk with the Goddess - just lovely.

Just like Saiyuki itself, your story shines best in the little details and the things not said.

Simply beautiful.

Gojyo's character is written perfectly, letting see the hurt but caring child that lives inside his heart just below the facade he puts up every day, and Kazeon Bosatsu's POV is really interesting and well written too.

A really really good job!