I thought it was beautiful! It takes a rare kind of talent to spin words the way you do; not only did you get the message across, you did it wonderfully. Words can be beautiful-like crystalline and love and musical, and it takes writers like you to give them their fullest potential. Keep writing-you have the gift!

This wasn't half bad.

It was awesome and sweet! I think you really captured the feelings of Sweden, Finland I'm not so sure, but Sweden was cool just like him!

Really sweet!

The world needs more SuFin like this. I love out

HOLY SHIZZ MAN THAT WAS THE BEST MOST BEAUTIFUL POET NONSENSE I HAVE EVER READ OMG JUST GOOD GOD THAT WAS AMAZING

Beautiful

Woah, but that was BEAUTIFUL. Beautifully written!

That was beautiful. It showed raw emotions, and captured the feeling between the two in a different way I haven't thought of before.
Keep up the great work!

Wow, that was so beautiful! It's so lovely to read a such a poetic, lyrical story like yours. I also feel that you really nailed their relationship and emotions superbly well. Good job!
Also Paul Simon music is the best.

Beautiful!

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I think this is great! It captured the idolatry that people too often give into when they have unrequited love. I quite like it. :D Nice work. :)

Why is this a one-shot?

Why?

;A;

OH. MY. GAHD.

Beautiful. Seriously. YOU'RE MY IDOL. xDDD

There's just something about this story... something that makes you feel so depressed and crap, but still makes you want to desperately cling on to the possibility that Finland might love Sweden... somehow...

I JUST LOVE IT. THE WAY YOU EVOKE SO MANY EMOTIONS AND-

NGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGH I wanna cry. D: