I love how Kagome isn’t just anyone here and actually has a job as the GREAT DETECTIVE. Also, love how she’s partnered with L in this one. Please do consider continuing this story!

I think you nailed L and Kagome, this is a good fic happy I read it.

very interesting dynamic between the two. i wouldn't be against more of this idea. thanks for sharing with us.

I love it! This is completely amazing! You have to continue this! I really really like your writing style! Hope to read more soon!

Pleaseeeeeee make a sequel!

:)-

Oh my goodness, you need to continue this! that was amazing. Maybe, just maybe l doesn't die... Maybe Kagome saves him by talking to Rim... (0.0)

I certainly liked it. Their friendship came through and the fact they were familiar with each other.

I love it! There should be chapters :P

You did great

Aww... This is really sad... (sweet as well, though)
D:
Noooo...L...Don't gooooo...
Poor Kagome. She seems to know what's coming. I can't help but imagine her getting involved with the case after he dies, or something. Heh.
Well, this is brilliant, and I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for writing it.

This Is so adorable and REALISTIC, I can picture this perfectly.

I like your writing style, keep up the good work!

I really like your story and I also enjoyed the way you made the characters relationship. It makes them seem like they're unspoken friends but gives you the ability if you wish to, to make them more in another chapter. If you couldn't tell that's my way of hinting that I like the story and wish you would write more

ok! so i loved this chapter! OH YEAH! Please update. when you can of course. It's interesting so far and I like the direction its going.

Awwww that's so sweet~! cx lol don't worry- my review here won't be as long as the Hatsuoki Limited one xD

is there another part 2 this you could make a fullon fanfic in stead of just a one shot