Reviews for Beautiful Mess
Miller18 chapter 5 . 5/10
Please update and finish this story
demya-wings chapter 5 . 5/25/2015
Its a great story so far. I wish you would continue it!
xxunowhoxx chapter 5 . 5/20/2013
please continue, this is very interesting
Guest chapter 5 . 8/26/2012
I hope you write more! My brother hates twilight but when he read this story he actually liked it. So good for you! Can't wait for the next chapter.
LunaEvanna Longbottom chapter 2 . 8/26/2012
i really like it. Can't w8t 4 more.
sujari6 chapter 5 . 2/3/2012
Bella's got some nasty enemies.
All Hallows eve baby chapter 5 . 2/2/2012
hoping for more soon
pmk kelly chapter 5 . 2/2/2012
Ok I will review but telling us reviewing will make u update faster so please update asap
berdb chapter 5 . 2/2/2012
All Bella does is try to get out of getting any attention, so I am seriously confused on how the Cullen's could accuse her of taking advantage of them. She just wants to do her job and has not tried to do anything else than her job. For crying out loud, Alice and Rose have been all over her from day one.

Update soon,
berdb chapter 4 . 1/24/2012
Great story. I can't wait to read more. Edward and his family put Bella in jail? WTF? There is no way to come back from that. What happened to her poor mother? I hope Jacob was able to help Renee.

The only reason she should care about proving Tanya and Victoria's guilt is to get herself out of jail. The Cullen's were stupid enough to hire ex-strippers and to give them power within their company, THIS is not Bella's responsibility. All they did was prove to Bella that people of their "supposed" class and wealth stick together.

They must of trusted Tanya and Victoria more than Bella, so she took the fall.

I would stay the hell away from them once out of jail. Who needs enemies when you have friends like them?
darkangel0212 chapter 1 . 12/10/2011
keep up the good work on your stories
sujari6 chapter 4 . 11/7/2011
Evil Tanya made even worse by teaming up with Victoria and James.
SweetiePieSaysHi chapter 4 . 11/3/2011
Love it
Green eyes 72 chapter 4 . 11/3/2011
Oh god Skankya is such a dumb slut hopefully they will catch on to her gold digging ways...lol Thanks good story
pmk kelly chapter 4 . 11/2/2011
Loved it
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