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Me pareció muy lindo y creativo ;), gracias por escribir 3

Soooo cute!

nice

Once again, you break my heart and warm it at the same time. You have quite the talent for bittersweet cuteness.

*fluffs up* so cute

Not bad keep them coming

very sweet and Nezumi hides his feelings way too much, yes, and sleep breaks all barriers :D

That was really quite adorable.

Excellent! I absolutely loved this. Your characterization is perfect and your writing skills do the trick almost by themselves.

Also, this was incredibly adorable, kept smiling -squealing- for quite a while. Shion was amazing, just as he's supposed to be, and Nezumi was -well, Nezumi, really.

Thank you very much for posting.

-Ana V.

AWWWWW SO ADORBS *adds to favs*

Dawwwwwwww, that was so cute.

This was absolutely adorable! I really loved it! *ads to favorites* thank you for writing this story :)

This was nice. From what I can tell just by grazing the summaries, their aren't many stories that really focus on Nezumi. It is more about Shion: how clueless and overly adorable he is, and he is a U.K.E because isn't it obvious? Shorter light hair Do good-er innocent/clueless boy U.K.E - I am not a fan of these standards.

Anyway, I wish their was more that just focused on Nezumi, or didn't have sex at all. The anime did the relationship justice without even having to add lust into the picture. Mindless sex kind of ruins the bond between Shion & Nezumi that was shown so smoothly in the anime. -pouts- I don't want it.

But this was lovely.

I WILL CLOBBER YOU WITH A STICK BECAUSE I ENJOYED THIS
I lied I wouldn't do that to a good writer like yourself
good work! it was fluffy and cute, and I couldn't catch a flaw. Keep it up! :3