| Reviews for The Protected |
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   Rising action studio chapter 1 . 7/8/2018 I really love this story! It's very well written and the interaction between Amelia and the smoker are very entertaining and make me smile. I also the love the way you wrote the hunter. A loyal dog whose lost their owner. Its super sweet but also sad and... and theirs just so much I love about this book. It's even inspired me to try to write my own. I know you haven't updated in quite some time amd I won't ask or plead. I'm sure you have your reasons. I just wanted to thank you for writing this far and deciding to share this story. Even if it wasnt left 4 dead and just and original work I would still read it. Anyway I won't waste anymore of your time. I could go on about how much I adore your book and it be forever. I just hope where ever you are writer that you are happy! |
| Kyn chapter 14 . 12/10/2016 GOD DAMN IT HOW DARE YOU. |
| Kyn chapter 12 . 12/10/2016 Poor Fluffy loving hunter and his lost girl/boy... |
| Kyn chapter 10 . 12/10/2016 Amelia: master of the innuendo! |
| Kyn chapter 9 . 12/10/2016 This story needs to be interrupted by Moses eating the zombies he's killing XD Boy needs some nutrients! |
| Kyn chapter 7 . 12/10/2016 *Cackling delightedly and maniacally* I love this story! |
| Kyn chapter 6 . 12/10/2016 So many emoted hearts are gushing out of me! |
| Kyn chapter 5 . 12/10/2016 HE HAD PECS (*Cackling into hands*) You had not mastered soft-handed yet at this point in your career, madamn author! XD XD XD |
| Kyn chapter 4 . 12/10/2016 Do not undermine yourself by interjecting (totally spelled wrong) into your own work XD. Of course you've spelled things wrong, alas! Don't self-sabotage! NEver, never! |
| Kyn chapter 3 . 12/10/2016 You have a natural storytelling gift. I looked for hours through similar material and each story made me grimace in disgust. The second I alighted on your work, you hooked me. You caught my attention. You've the bard's gift, so keep working at it all the days of your life in whatever forms you most enjoy! Your writing needs some work on the mechanical level, and I think you'll benefit from your experience here on ffnet and in other places. /Keep writing/ This is so good. I'm nestling in with my blanket and my cocoa for the long haul to read the rest of it, and though I see you've likely abandoned the story by now, (2013!) i hope you still get the reviews and that my enthusiasm for your talent and your cute Smoker/OC pairing makes you smile. All the loves! |
| Shad03 chapter 14 . 2/2/2015 Hello and Hi. Nice chapters by the way, you got a new person to review congrates. Anyways uh can't wait till next chapter. |
| Danielle chapter 14 . 8/7/2014 Oh my god. I JUST LOVE THIS! I have it pinned to my browser, I hope to see more of this story and see what happens in the end. (hopefully there will be love between Smokey and the girl? ) Keep up your wonderful work! |
| Redhybrid chapter 14 . 6/10/2014 a...hunter...with a purple purse...now i have seen everything...and aron appears just now...but were is amelias brother...i'm suspicious now... |
| Ehwhat chapter 14 . 4/9/2014 Nah its ok I dont hate you for finishing there...much. GAD I love this story so much! I basically power read it from over enjoyment and when I reached the end I almost cried upon realising I will now have to WAIT for more! (It will be so worth it though) look forward to next chapter! P.S THE HUNTER CANT DIE I NEED TO KNOW WHAT WAS IN THE PUUUUURSE! Xx |
| tainted-the hybrid chapter 14 . 2/24/2014 Plz update soon |
