Reviews for Ultimate
Guest chapter 1 . 12/4/2018
Flufff!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/4/2018
OMFG THIS IS AMAZING!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/30/2016
The robin from Young justice is Tim drake, dick Grayson is nightwing now
Guest chapter 1 . 6/28/2015
Aw love this cute!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/18/2015
Oh my gosh, how it this promoted in the world?!
Shall we see what God has to say about this perversion?

Leviticus 20:13 - If a man also lie with mankind, as he lieth with a woman, both of them have committed an abomination: they shall surely be put to death; their blood [shall be] upon them.

OHHHHHHHHH hear that all you gays, faggots, sodomites, and lesbians? Yea, that goes for you too! (:-D
I am pleased with this statement, because many who will read this are going to hell.
How about another?

Leviticus 18:22 - Thou shalt not lie with mankind, as with womankind: it [is] abomination.

An abomination. This is where the world Is headed, and it is because God has given them up to a reprobate mind. But, there is hope. There is salvation and faith INLY through God, the King of Kings and Lord of Lords. He sent his son to DIE for you! For everyone, because as much as God loves you, if you are not saved, one day yiu will hear these words. Depart from me, ye cursed into everlasting fire, made for the devil and his angels. The second coming of Christ is coming. Are you ready?
BrienneJamie chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
Loved it! I wish I had a relationship as great as theirs! WHY?!
Jolyn.locked chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
I read this a while ago, and now that I've read it again...it seems like it would go really well with the song "God Blessed the Broken Road"...but that's just a thought. I loved the story though, good job!

...Then I went an reread the top author's note, and I was like, 'oh, it was already based off of a song ...oh well! Still goes well with the song mentioned above!'

Shadow
schubskie chapter 1 . 11/16/2012
Aw, that gave me the warm fuzzies inside. I really really liked the "ultimate" thing, I've obviously read a lot of fics where Dick and Wally get together (maybe one too many xP) but this one is definitely one of the top _.

Besides the excellent grammar (I can always count on you for that xD) I thought it was unique that you described how many guys Dick was dating before he dated Wally. I've only ever seen that once. And I really thought that it felt /real/ when Wally realized (well, thought) that Dick just wanted to be in love for /love's sake/ and not for the person who he is dating.

Which, actually happens a lot these days, what with teenagers running off just for the thrill of dating :P

LOL and Walls with the popcorn in the beginning...makes me think of my sister sometimes xD (she plays A LOT of tennis so is constantly like: "Yeah, yeah, just get me some food here man...)

Awesome work! And I wasn't even looking through your profile this time for the story...
littleindiemuffins chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
"Wally, I'm gay."
"Good for you! Pass the popcorn!"
That was my favorite part! It was just so freaking adorbs!
utterlyheartbroken chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
Aww.
I loved, like totally SUPER loved this!
Birdflash forever!
FallenHope-Angel chapter 1 . 1/6/2012
aww it was just so sweet. i loved it so much i men it was really beautiful.
Sammy1792 chapter 1 . 10/29/2011
I actually read this a little over a month ago and forgot to review - so this is my delayed review: Beautiful. Fantastic. Loved it! :D
LadyZotalot chapter 1 . 9/20/2011
When I am nervous I don't sleep. Collegeno fun. ANYWAYS.

This starting scene is perfect. You've got Wally just being himself, pigging out in front of a jumbo TV. I love how he blows off the drama off Dick's comment because DUDE THE MOVIE IS STARTING. lol.

Wallyblack hole. Love that comparison, but I like the idea of Wally the puma scarer-person guy even more. (If he saw a puma wouldn't he just run away? Nope. He'd probably forget he could and get almost mauled until Dick tells him RUN!)

Okay, I think Dick assuming guestsgirl scouts is so sad. Poor guy, in his big scary mansion. Nobody comes to play. :(

...Wally would make a terrible cookie delivery person by the way. NOM NOM NOM, yes?

haha. Wally's observation about the quality of Gothamites is very smooth.

You know, it might seem odd that Dick wouldn't find a guy in Gotham who'd be good for him since he's so great...but I think you're right. Dick is RICH and SMART so his boyfriends would think he's usable and putting on airs...basically, he'd get the bimbos "Brucie" dates.

"Since I've got someone who caused me to notice every detail about them."

OMG I am hugging Wally now because he finally said I beautiful liner that works instead of makes you cringe. So cute! Dick inspires him, right?

This one was very sweet TWWOO; I love how it covered a longer length of time. It makes them getting together so much more amazing.

-Zot!
Captain Kork chapter 1 . 9/19/2011
This was really adorable! I love how Wally totally brushes off the whole thing. Keep it up!
Kiwisilence chapter 1 . 9/19/2011
Sorry I really pushed off reviewing this (a day late. Lol). Wally is adorably nice to just accept Robin in the beginning. I'm wondering if Batman as the world's greatest detective suspects that Wally and Robin like each other. When Robin said, "my options on who to date is severely limited..." I was thinking how true that is in real life - but in the dc comic universe, who wouldn't want to date some criminals? If it was the Riddler or Bane, count me in... Anyway, the line "Like anyone in Gotham is a good person" and Robin/Wally's playful/quirky humor is always fun to read from you.
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