Ummm...I was just wandering
WHERE THE FUCK IS CLOUD
and I may realise u could be dead with Covid-19
Wanna be friends hahaha
Jk most dangerous phrase ever

When are you going to update?

Wow. This is cool! It follows the storyline, but in its own way. Awesome!

In an alternate universe where Scribbler was actually a good person who didn't obsess over MLP shipping and anime fanfics, she risks her life to save all the children that were distraught and emotionally scarred by what other people on the internet did to the,.

You have a good plot but you messed up your descriptions. Bold, Italics, that stuff doesn't tell anybody whether it's thought or flashback or anything. Not if you don't actually find other ways to make it more clear. I don't even know what the story is about after the first few chapters because of this.

phiroth without it being slash. Thanks for the great read, hope you'll update again!

Dang... This. This is awesome! All the different perspectives and thoughts! Your writing style is wonderful I really liked the parts where cloud struggled. And the non-slash pairings. Thanks so much, it's hard to find a good story with zack, cloud, and even se

This is really amazing! Will you update soon? ;)

ahhhh

I am so confused/excited right now...

Very good. Love it. Please write more when you can.

I LOVE THIS STORY! I was expecting another cheesy, weird werewolf-and-vampire story. But I started reading anyway. Man, am I glad that I did! The vampire plague fits so seamlessly with the real storyline, it almost makes me wonder why the creators of Final Fantasy didn't do that! I think your version of the events of Crisis Core are much better! And I don't say that to just anyone with an awesome story! I adore the way you phrase and describe things. Truly I do! I have a love for unique words and phrases, and your writing definitely tickles my fancy!

Gosh, it was hard to not fangirl squeal in the middle of the dead-silent study hall class when Grimoire came in! Are you going to have Vincent in here too? That would be FANTASTIC! Though people would probably always try to stake him because of his red eyes! XD Poor guy!

I am sure I'm not the first to say this but I'll reiterate: Hojo has issues. I liked how you portrayed him, so that it's logical but also...well, showing his insecurities and his...issues.

Tifa's spirit sounds like an interesting character. I adored the names of the stories you had Barret read - and suggest. There's something heartwarming about the mental imagery of a hulking man reading inane children's stories in a gravelly deep voice.

Minor nitpick - EXTREMELY minor, but...the official spelling is Barret - not Barrett. Though - granted, spellcheck always adds the extra 't' and I guess it doesn't really matter either way.

I found it interesting that you had Tifa be the instigator for world-saving. Usually it's Barret who starts it all up - but I'm not complaining.

Bruin - a bear spirit?

Awesome chapter. Keep going!

Awww. Very cute. Please write more when you can.

Another great chapter as always! Aww, Zackie-poo and Aerith sitting in a tree, k-i-s-s-i-n-g! Let's just hope it will turn out alright for her in the end...

I like it. Why you don't have more reveiws is beyond me!
JP